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the rise of the royal serpent clan limia/naga

(first story I've written + English is not my first language so I use "deepl" a lot, sorry for the mistakes ) The MC is reincarnated in a Limia/Naga tribe as the son of the tribe's chief. He'll do whatever he can to make himself and his growing tribe more powerful (I'll do my best to keep the story free), so help me out by writing constructive criticism.! one or two chapters a week !

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the beginning

/pov mc/

How long can I stay motionless in this abyssal room?

WHO AM I? What am I?

why I'm here, who put me here?

/6 months later/

I feel something liquid around me, it's viscous and gelatinous.

/2 months later/

how long have i had horns? where are my legs? why did i grow a tail?

/3 months later/

the space between me and the ``walls`` is less and less present

The "walls" have a strange texture, like an egg, but which egg?

/1 months later/

I'm hungry, I've got to find a way out.

Why not try to own the walls? Why am I thinking about this after an eternity?

/pov omnipotent/

/year 193 according to the lunar calendar/

in a cradle lies an egg twice the size of an ostrich's. looking around, you can see a group of people.

The four most important people in the group were close to the egg, they formed a monstrous mixture of snake and human, the snake at the bottom and the human at the top, apart from these four monsters, the rest of the group were monsters, a snake with a torso, arms, a humanoid head, tusks protruding from their snout, big and strong. giants 2~3 meters high and 1.30 meters wide, abominations.

*isure*

a piece of eggshell has just fallen, everyone freezes and turns their heads towards the newborn. in the hole in the shell a black eye with a fandu chrysalis the color of a red mixed with purple.

Have some idea about my story? Comment it and let me know.

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