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THE RISE OF THE FATELESS

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อ่านนิยาย THE RISE OF THE FATELESS โดย ผู้เขียน kasiel_smith ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.In a world ruled by calamities and apocalypses,A world where everything and everyone are predetermined by fate.A new-born calamity is robbed of his fate and his family by the heir of the fate eater, b...

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In a world ruled by calamities and apocalypses,A world where everything and everyone are predetermined by fate. A new-born calamity is robbed of his fate and his family by the heir of the fate eater, but due to a bargain, the previous calamity was allowed to live, leading to the creation of the lost of chaos. Join Seth the Fateless on his journey for revenge and power. Would he be able to break the order of fate? Find out with me.

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The Dungeon Master System

'My entire body felt like it was being cooked. Suddenly my body exploded in flames, but they didn't injure me. It was like everything around me was suddenly lit on fire. After the fire spread to all parts of my body, I felt my bones and muscles shift in size. The process wasn't painful, but it was extremely uncomfortable. My body grew heavier as it changed shape, abandoning the usual weight a human would find comfortable.' - Excerpt from The Dungeon Master System. In the world of Woroch, only the strong survive. For thousands of years, the world was enveloped in a state of war and strife. Races such as Humans, Dwarves, Elves, and even Demons fought for territory and supremacy. When the war ended, Humans found themselves on top. The Humans' rule brought a new era of suffering for the other races. Some bowed down, some were enslaved, while a few others were wiped from the history books. Demons, Fairies, and Dragons all went extinct, but now it's time for them to make a comeback. Please keep in mind the MC is not an absolute genius. He will make mistakes. Words per chapter will be at least 2K. Total Wordcount (As of Part 74): 131,407 I don't have a consistent release rate thanks to college, but I'll try to do at least one chapter a day Reach me on Discord, Kenneth#5732, if you're interested in speaking with me. If you're interested in the discord server, copy this link: https://discord.gg/QRajKdQZ (DM me if it's invalid)

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World Alter - Black Rosetta

Rose is a pitiful abused princess who married with a very powerful king from the Solomon kingdom Arthazia. This king was undefeated and being feared because how powerful he is, especially with his magic that beyond reason. A few years ago before the darkness of wars erupted. This particular man was the one she cares and loved with all her heart. And then everything changed, since neighboring country decide to attack her hometown kingdom Euresia regardless the atrocity they committed in order to wipe Euresia from the map. Solomon kingdom who angry at this madness trying to defend the Euresia kingdom, and eventually all hell loose because wars becoming more cruel when the world decide the Solomon kingdom was their common enemies. -------------------------------------------------------------

Yasha10 · แฟนตาซี
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faes is an orphan girl living her normal life as a student. she gets late to the restaurant she works in and gets fired. thinking of what to she was going home when she encountered an accident while saving a girl. she wished to meet god one time to beat him up for the painful life she went through before dying. suddenly she finds herself in a space in front of someone who calls themselves god. they send her to a fantasy world where she have to save the world and survive. with the same name faes begins her journey along with a system in the new world called lore. but is her luck with her when she encounteres a dragon just as she open her eyes as faes monesterio von altai the 2nd princess of kingdom altai? lets see how she survives and saves the world lore with a system and op skills. warning-the story contains cursing. ..........

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Rosen BLACK

The empire of Rosen is rather new in that it was created one hundred years ago when vampires revealed themselves to exist on the continent of Irona. Irona originally was comprised of seven separate kingdoms that were constantly at war with each other because of their different beliefs and cultures, but after the vampires stepped into the light and revealed to the humans that they were more than just myth, the seven kingdoms agreed to unite under one ruler and thus established the Rosen Empire. The new emperor created an organization called Rozen Black, a society of specialized warriors who took an oath under god, to battle all dark forces with their main focus on protecting all of humanity and the people of Rosen, as well as eradicating the vampire population. The story focuses around sixteen year old Valac Pierce, who is the adopted son of the last commander for the legion of Rosen Black but who is now a holy priest for a modest church. On the day of his sixteenth birthday, Valac planned to enroll in the hunters training school, Paradiso Academy and learn the ways of a true vampire hunter like his father before him. However, after being forced to drink the blood of a vampire, he realizes that his body had started to undergo changes that he couldn’t begin to describe. Besides his appearance changing, his physical abilities enhanced as well. With these new developments to his physiology, he begins to attract the unwanted attention of vampires who were sent by the evil vampire king to exterminate him! What is the truth about his past and why does he have these inhuman powers?

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Writing quality - 2 stars Generally, the paragraphs were massive and hard to read, with punctuation missing(mainly just commas or and, etc) and the flow of the writing was somewhat poor(considering you aren’t a native speaker it’s to be expected you would need to practice more), I would recommend get Grammarly as it would hopefully help with the punctuation. Updating stability - 3 stars The book has only been out for a day so I just put it as 3 stars Story development - 3 stars So far not much has happened but before he got his fate tested it seemed like he already knew he didn’t have any fate yet once he stood on the path he was shocked by the fact but that might be more of a character problem than a story development one Character design - 2 stars Unfortunately, the writing quality has somewhat impacted the ability to convey the appearance of characters but it’s only a matter of time before you improve on this and writing quality World background - 2 stars We don’t know much about the world so far, obviously if you read the auxiliary chapter you know about the various areas that the world is split into and the power levels but not much else has been conveyed as of yet, of course the book only has 8 chapters of actual story so that’s to be expected Overall, the story has potential to get much better and could eventually become pretty popular as the power system seems fairly unique so far, although I only know the names of the levels and not how you progress so my opinion on that may change Also, you should probably choose one out of the three tags cultivation, superpowers and magic as those are fairly distinct power system types and might confuse people since you have all three, superpower seems the least suited since superpowers usually have no room for growth other than learning how to use them better

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