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the dlc system

the cycle has started in our world. as a defense mechanism the world chooses the human with the most potential to stop the cycle but for unknown reason the system goes to the sern. what will sern do to stop the cycle? can he even stop the cycle? did anyone ever stopped the cycle? ____________________________________________ this is my first novel and i am not very good at english so... please show me the mistakes i did. ____________________________________________ this story will have the viewer change the story with votes and make some changes to the system with powerstones. (in the future)

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the dream - part 1

Hank was at the final destination. in front of hank was a black bridge and the castle. under the bridge was lava. the bridge was made by the titanium which made this bridge very... common. in this world titanium was very weak and rich people often use different metals like steryum.

hank started to cross the bridge. in the middle of the of the bridge a guard run towards him to attack.

hank took his spear from its back and started to take position.

the guard had reached hank and started to attack with its niryum sword

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hank was a slow person and naturally he couldnt avoid the hit luckily the damage was too low? the sword was a niryum sword!

hank thought this was the place where the demon lord was not some vicont house.

while hank was thinking whats happening the guard attacked again.

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hank was annoyed by the attacks and aimed at the guardians heart.

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the guardian was dead but instead of falling to the ground it started to become larger. hank was unable to get his spear so he ran away from the guardian and stopped when running 30 seconds.

then the guardian exploded damaging both him and the sword.

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the weapon has been vaporised and hank realised what this castle really was.

and with that the story started. please tell me what do you think about this chapter or start.

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