expected ir unexpected?

*moan* As the students pass by, they hear this sound coming from a supply room, but just like everyone else who tried to look, they notice the door is locked, but their curiosity makes them stand in front of the door thinking about who is doing this inside without any concern for be heard, without them realizing that whoever is inside is the student that everyone at school wants to catch -inside the room- cao ming lying on the table breathing heavily with her white hair all messy and spread across the table, her chest is rising and falling while her body white and pure like jade is showing to the world and with visible drops of sweat and her nipples a little stiff with her excitement, without realizing she has her legs open, giving those in front of her a view of her swollen and closed pussy while they can also appreciate her slender, tall and smooth legs. *you're very sensitive down there, well not for long I think, after all I'm going to fuck you so much that you won't even be able to feel satisfied anymore without my penis in you says Ying with a wicked smile on your face* *humf*, *hunf* While Cao gasps for air, Ying approaches him without any clothes on and opens her legs wide apart, enjoying the view of Cao's virgin pussy before he deflowers her. Ying, soon getting excited about tasting the fruit of this beauty for the first time, positions his penis in front of the dog's sacred place and pushes it just a little to feel the resistance of her barrier, but as Ying prepares to penetrate her completely, he freezes for a moment. hearing a sound and his smile grows even bigger and he has a better idea...

-academy classroom 39 minutes before- yen shi sitting in his chair focused on looking at the system and clearly bothered by the fact that he is gaining points while yen shi's supposed former friend takes advantage and touches cao ming, while he is focused on his system, soon yen is taken out of his thoughts when I heard the old teacher shouting *listen here you brats, you haven't been good students until now and I don't expect you to come so be quiet now, we have a new student and you should respect her and not insult her unless you want to either die or go through the worst experience of your life* says the old man while thinking with a face of fear and something similar to dread and everyone can swear that if they didn't know this old cultivator they would think he was about to piss himself with fear, *welcome the new shao gen student* while saying This the old man gives space for an extremely beautiful girl to enter, she has long black hair as dark as the darkest night, her red eyes look like an endless sea of fire and blood that are both captivating and frightening, she enters wearing tight clothes in the area of her breasts and ass, with open vertical lines in the area of her legs showing her legs and thighs as white and smooth as jade, her dress has an opening in the chest area that demonstrates her enormous cleavage, yen shi can say that she is a taller woman. beautiful that he has ever seen but there is something about her that makes him feel strange there seems to be an aura around her that is familiar especially to that body it is as if he has forgotten something but the body remembers..... *ding detected an abnormal situation* *error, error, it is not possible to analyze, I am looking for solutions..... solution found, extreme danger level, reassessing low danger level, error, error low and extreme danger level at Same time , * *host she seems to know you, while she's in the room I won't be able to show myself because she might notice me if I show myself while I'm near her, but as it's an unexpected situation there will be rewards if you can get out of it*

**mission: manage to escape or turn her into a lover, varied rewards, if you manage to calm her down and make her your lover she will have a place in the list of women that earns you obscene points and higher level prizes are guaranteed, but be careful because she seems to know the host before the fusion of souls and at the same time she seems to be £€£|£÷`×€✓ she is also very angry, as compensation for the dangerous mission I will help you remember some moments you spent with it before the fusion but due to limited time and a mental block it will only be parts and not everything will be at 100% of its functionality*

Hello, this is the author, I would like to know your opinion on the book so far, and if errors are noticed, it is because English is not my first language and I hope to improve my writing and correct these errors as the book progresses. and these revisions would be important because this is the first time I've tried to publish and I don't know if I'll be able to publish as frequently and accurately