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Rebirth as a monster

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What is Rebirth as a monster

อ่านนิยาย Rebirth as a monster โดย ผู้เขียน Erlands_Erls ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.Drake a criminal who after years of criminal.life finnaly understood what kind of life was he leading during his lifetime.By spending his last days of life before execution he was in deep thought.What...

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Drake a criminal who after years of criminal.life finnaly understood what kind of life was he leading during his lifetime.By spending his last days of life before execution he was in deep thought.What did happen that made me do all these things couldnt i simply live my life differently and get family not start doing all the things i did. as he spent these days finaly the guards arrived and took him to the excecution grounds. Drake a person who reggrets all that he did during his life avakens floating in void and meeting something.The thing says to him ill give you a chance to transmigrate but it will be unusual so have fun... follow him as he changes his new life and from criminal rises a hero The art doesnt belong to me if you want it taken down please contact me :)

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Kurosis
KurosisLv4Kurosis

love these types of monster evolution stories only thing annoying was the system punishing the MC for cussing at it. ............................

WiLeYBiGhEaD
WiLeYBiGhEaDLv11WiLeYBiGhEaD

I was hoping for something different given the synopis and tags. This is not a monter story but a light hearted pokemon story. I was hoping the pokemon aspect would have been implimented differently as blood/gore/monsters/danmachi/reincarnated criminal don’t mix well together. However, the story throws all of that away for lighthearted pokemon army grinding in the dungeon and it really lacks the tension that fictional dungeons with monsters have. The power curve is also off with Bell hitting lvl 2 before the mc even reaches floor 7 even with a system, immortality, and a pokemon army (he is in the dungeon 24/7). The mc acts very childish and righteous for an executed adult criminal(known murderer). It is certainly and interesting idea to have a criminal reincarnate in the danmachi danmachi dungeon, taking the chance to live a better way. But it doesn’t match with the rest of the story, the internal consistency is lacking. Finally, the grammer needs work. The scentence structure and dialouge is rough but average for a fanfic. However, the frequent misspelling of words and giant paragraphs are also present. Easy things like lunge or from. These are easy fixes with any free spell checker and seperating paragraphs. Also, the worldbuilding is fee and far between. Overall, it is certainly interesting but poor grammer and mixed messages drag it down. It is definitely above av for a fanfic but I think a different setting and mc would have worked better with the lighthearted pokemon army story(plus spellcheck).

Vitor_Gamer_Br
Vitor_Gamer_BrLv4Vitor_Gamer_Br

the protagonist lacks charisma, looks like a child and not a criminal who is being punished for his crimes. 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐

naraiz_ryhall
naraiz_ryhallLv3naraiz_ryhall

Founder
FounderLv2Founder

Yeah I'm not even gonna read past chapter 2 because the grammar is gonna kill me by the time. Grammar : was bad Updates : hasn't updated for nearly 2 weeks Development: bland Character: otaku dumbish Background: danmachi with pokemon?

stinkclaw
stinkclawLv14stinkclaw

I love what you have done my only qualm is your lack of quotation marks which you will need later on to separate people's speech. otherwise keep up the good work.

CRACK_Turtle
CRACK_TurtleLv5CRACK_Turtle

meh..................................................................................................................................... . ..

GodlySamurai
GodlySamuraiLv4GodlySamurai

Love the story so far. Keep it up <3

UnnamedKing
UnnamedKingLv2UnnamedKing

definitely the best Danmachi I've read so far And well I don't know what else to say ...... . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . ........ . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Flaiver
FlaiverLv4Flaiver

Great Novel. An original idea and a good implementation. Quite interesting evolutions and, most importantly, a funny piece. I advise everyone. 10/10

ALFAS
ALFASLv4ALFAS

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Mortal_God
Mortal_GodLv5Mortal_God

overall the story is good. Ijust dont like that the system gives him evolution choices but proceeds to directly evolve him without his consent.

gkfk
gkfkLv4gkfk

4 * because there is no Romance also[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

DaoisteHo6ya
DaoisteHo6yaLv1DaoisteHo6ya

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I_am_inevitable
I_am_inevitableLv13I_am_inevitable

Very Noice

antonio_montenegro
antonio_montenegroLv3antonio_montenegro

Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia

RuneSmith
RuneSmithLv4RuneSmith

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Tom_Anderson_6799
Tom_Anderson_6799Lv2Tom_Anderson_6799

the main character has paid his du diligence of penance in prison and the void for his crimes and is trying to do better in his second life it is beautifull and Iove were the stories going

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