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Rain World: The Knight

I stumbled upon this captivating game known as "Rain World," and an overwhelming desire to craft a fanfiction story about it immediately welled up within me. As I delve into this creative endeavor, I'm utilizing ChatGPT to enhance and refine my writing. I would greatly appreciate your feedback on the result. ps. this synopsis is even edited by ChaTGPT

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Look To The Moon

Dont know if i will be able to update for the week so im throwing out the two chapters early

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Exiting the tunnel, Finn and his group found themselves in a vast room filled with long, blood vessel-like wires that crisscrossed throughout the space. These wires were interconnected and led to large boxes suspended from the room's ceiling. The sight was both eerie and intriguing, leaving Finn with more questions about the strange and enigmatic environment he once explored in the game.

{Finn}Finn turned his head slowly in response to his name being called, away from the area above, and toward Spearmaster, who was wearing a small smile as he addressed him.

{Whats up SM?} Finn asked, a strange sensation building in his chest and a growing unease in the pit of his stomach as the question passed through their mental connection.

{I think we should split up after this} Silence echoed through the mental bridge, with Finn left speechless and uncertain about how to respond to Spearmaster's unexpected declaration, which luckily he did not have to as Echo soon spoke up.

{WHAT! We have been traveling with you for so long bro! why split up now when we can still keep going!} Echo's voice quivered with panic and sadness as he spoke. Over the weeks of their journey and the battles they had fought together, he had grown close to Spearmaster, and the news had clearly shaken him deeply.

{My iterator told me it would be best if we split up} Spearmaster's voice quivered slightly as they explained the situation, and it was evident that the news had affected them deeply. Finn watched in silence as Echo and Spearmaster continued to converse, their emotions running high and the conversation appearing to teeter on the brink of an argument, while he just sat their slightly stunned.

{Echo stop} Finn's calm and straightforward statement seemed to bring an abrupt end to the heated exchange between Echo and Spearmaster. Echo turned towards Finn, his emotions clearly on display with the hint of tears and an angry expression on his face

{WHAT DO YOU MEAN STOP DONT YOU CARE!} Finn's calm response seemed to irritate Echo even more, causing the batfly to raise his voice and express his frustration through their mental connection. Finn, however, maintained his composure, and there was a tinge of disappointment in his voice as he replied to Echo's outburst.

{Spearmaster has no choice in this} Finn said simply causing the batfly to go silent as they floated over to rest on his head, Finn and Spearmaster moved forward, their unspoken tensions simmering beneath the surface. They continued their journey, heading towards the mysterious box on the ceiling, leaving their disagreements and emotions behind for the time being.

Entering the room bathed in a soothing turquoise glow, Finn, Spearmaster, and Echo found themselves in an entirely different environment compared to the dimly lit and nerve-like passages they had traversed before. The room emanated a sense of serenity, and the change in atmosphere was palpable.

Finn looked around, taking in the new surroundings, while Spearmaster and Echo seemed equally intrigued by the room's ethereal ambiance. There was a sense of otherworldly beauty in the turquoise illumination that filled the chamber.

The beauty of their enviroment slightly stunned the group but that did not stop them from noticing the shadow which covered them as Finn, Spearmaster, and Echo soon turned to see the hovering figure behind them, their serene eyes gazing upon the them. The figure seemed composed and peaceful, blending seamlessly with the tranquil atmosphere of the turquoise-lit chamber.

Finn couldn't help but feel a sense of curiosity about this enigmatic being. Their presence exuded an aura of wisdom and serenity, making them appear otherworldly. Finn exchanged a glance with Spearmaster, and they both silently acknowledged the mysterious being as one thing.

A Iterator

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{@^@&#*#(#()$} As Finn gazed at the humanoid Iterator, an incomprehensible voice pierced their mind. The Iterator's three-fingered mechanical hands swiftly danced, conjuring holograms that held images of creatures finn has seen and not seen seemingly looking for something.

After a bit Look to the moon efficiently displayed an image of a slugcat before shaking her head and gesturing once again with her hands, causing Finn and SM to float upward. Finn's initial horror prompted him to summon a protective shield, preparing for a fight. However, what followed eased his tension as a peculiar symbol briefly appeared on finn and the groups forehead, which he soon realized it was the mark of communication.

{Hello there.Are my words reaching you?} Look to the moon asked as she floated finn and spearmaster back down to the floor as finn relaxed his Guard.

Finn nodded simply, which prompted the Iterator before them to clap joyfully, evidently pleased with this.

{Thats good! But I must ask what brings you 3 here? If for no particular reason your welcome to stay as long as you dont interrupt} Look to the moon said their gentle voice traveling across the bridge between her and the groups mind, which in response to the question, Finn turned to look at Spearmaster, who stepped forward to address the situation.

{I don't know... my iterator told me to come here first but did not say why.} Spearmaster voiced his confusion evident. However, Look to the Moon didn't wait for further explanation and began scanning them with a light, resulting in three screens of data  to appear before her.

{Poor thing. There are no records of your body's blueprints. Nor is it reasonable to assume your extreme adaptations are possible through… natural means.} Look to the moon said sympathetically as the halo of light which floated behind her swirled slightly as she continued looking at the screens of data until she seemed to freeze at what looked to be Finns information.

{You Poor Thing} Those words made Finn frown, and the eyes of the Iterator turned to him, conveying a sense of pity that left Finn perplexed. However, before he could inquire further, the Iterator continued speaking.

{I don't even know how you are alive when your body contains so many mutations, defects and imperfections} "Look to the Moon" spoke, her voice trembling slightly, indicating her profound sympathy for a plight finn never knew he had.

{I could read the data contained in your body, but the process could take several cycles. Time I very sadly lack.} look to the moon says sadness leaking through her voice as she slolwy moved throughout the room never taking her eye of finn, but after a bit she soon moved on to stare at spearmaster.

{As for you brave messenger I could remove the pearl from you, but the process would be very unpleasant for you. I also do not believe the contents within it are directed to me. If you are indeed a messenger, then I urge you to move on.} With these words Moon lifted her hands once more causing finn and the group to float over to the rooms exit much to finns surprise but before they reach the exit a sudden cataclysmic like rumble suddenly shook the room causing the lights to suddenly turn red as the body of look tot he moon fell and crashed to the floor.

Luckily finn and his group were finn as they landed on their feet finding the telekinetic force holding their body gone but even so they were frozen in place looking at the once angelic looking iterator now face planeted onto the floor.

{Hey SM... you can go} Finn said as he turned to the spearmaster who after a second of staring at him left with not even a goodbye while he approached the fallen figure of the iterator

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Look to the moon- nice,kind,sympathetic and loving

Really had fun with the start but when it got to look to the moon i felt like i choked and did her character and description dirty. also how do you think mc handled the split? was it good? was it bad? was it to unemotional?

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Name: Finn martin

Race: Slugcat(The knight)

Level: 9(139.2/900)

HP (Health Points): 162

MP (Magic Points): 58

STR: 16.35

AGI: 8.9

END: 16.35

WIS: 5.9

INT: 5.9

skill points: 1

stat points: 2.25(Just noticed the mistake)

[Skills]

[Bone shield(LV 8/10)]- allows the user to create a shield of bone with size determined by amount of mp used.

[Indomitable(Maxed)]- You shall not bend....

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[Name: Echo]

[level: 11](188.8/300)

[Skills: vision share,stealth,High speed flight,Bash]

(Note: none)

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