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After 5 minutes of waiting around Ann came back out and had me register my finger prints and iris on the phone. Ann-"Sorry about the wait, give me a few more minutes and I will have it all setup for you." She left and went to the back room again. Delium and I just sat around chatting waiting to leave. Delium seemed to be a bit depressed after talking about me leaving. I guess she will be shocked when I show her the pokemon I got for her. After about 10 minutes of waiting Ann came out with my phone and handed it to me. Ann-"If you have any questions please just give me a call and I will help any way I can." B-"Thank you Ann, I will take you up on that."

We left right after I paid for the phone, I was given a discount on everything and ended up only paying 200 pokedollars since I opened and account and sold them a variant pokecore. I ended up with 2563 pokedollars in my bank account. I figured I could get Delium some new clothes as well as I noticed most of hers looked faded. We walked into what seemed the only store in the town. It wasn't too big, but it had 2 floors and a basement. When we arrived, a sales clerk came up and asked what we were looking for I told her I needed pretty much everything for a trainer. I could see the $$ in her eyes. She took us around the store, and I picked up whatever I wanted. I purchased a few sets of clothes a nice bag and everything I wanted for camping. The technology was great. Everything shrunk down to a very small size so you could maximize your load. Once I got everything I wanted, to include 2 large knives. I had her lead the way to the women's department of the store. Delium didn't want anything and after a bit of back and forth, I won, and she started trying on clothes. While she was the changing room, I had the sales clerk go grab Delium some of the same clothes I got for traveling in the woods. Of course, it was just clothes. My bag was pretty much so people wouldn't ask where I kept everything. Even though I was a teenager now, I was an old man when it came to everything else. I noticed the little things that Delium would do when she saw something she liked. Having been married for a long time in the previous life, it was beaten into me about paying attention to those things. I grabbed all the clothes that she looked at and touched. By the time the sales clerk came back Delium had gone in and out of the changing room a few times. After about 40 minutes of Delium trying on clothes she decided on 1 dress. I about fell out of the chair I was sitting in. I walked in the dressing room and grabbed all the clothes that I thought looked great on her. I left only a few things dressing room as I noticed she didn't like them when she had them on. D-"What are you doing Bash?" B-"Ummm, buying clothes. What else would I be doing with an arm full of clothes at a store?" Naturally she wanted to refuse but the back and forth was too much to even start on. When we got the register with my stash of clothes and her clothes Delium was freaking out. She kept talking about it being too much as I expected. I really wanted to tell her to calm down as I am loaded and will be even more so in the near future. That's a conversation for later. By the time we left I had my backpack full to the brim and had 3 large bags in my hands.

We went strait home as shopping was more exhausting than traveling through the woods fighting pokemon. Delium didn't say anything on the way to the house. I could guess at what she was thinking but I wasn't 100% and figured she would talk once we got to her house.

Getting inside I took all the bags to the living room and set everything down and looked at Delium who had tears in her eyes. Giving her a hug, B-"what's wrong? Do you not want the new outfits? We can take them back if you don't like them?" Delium smacked me in the chest. D-"Don't you dare you idiot, do you know how long it's been since I had some new clothes? Thank you so much, I am going to miss you when you leave." B-"listen to me. Don't answer just listen to me. Do you trust me? As in if your life depends on it, do you trust me? Would you ever betray me? I have a way to know the truth. Once you answer and I test it, I will know the truth of the matter and it either way it will be a new beginning for both of us. Good or bad." She backed up out of my hug and just stared at me with tears in her eyes. D-"Yes I trust you with my life and everything I hold dear. I don't know why but I have no fear when I look in your eyes like I don't have anything to worry about when I'm with you." B-"Would you leave everything to come with me, not including your family?" D-"Yes" B-"Clothes your eyes" I thought of her entering my space with me. I felt the sensation of moving and opened my eyes. Delium was standing right in front of me. I heard a message in my head MFVO-"she will never betray you." I put my hand over her eyes before she opens them. B-"I'm about to show you something you can never tell anyone about, not even your kid. If people found out they would track us down and harm you to get to me." I pulled my hand away from her eyes and she had a confused look. We were in the open field with trees in the distance. There was a separated stack of dead pokemon about 50 feet away from us. A small pile of pokecores in the grass and Storm and Evee playing in the field. I guess they became good friends already. She was completely shocked. D-"Where are we Bash?" B-"This is my secret. I trust you and I want to share this with you. This is my storage space, the bracelet that never comes off me. This is the space inside it. For that matter the bracelet can't be take off, I have tried. I can put living beings in here away from harm. The things that are alive that come in here, must completely submit to me, so even if I wanted to kidnap you in here. I wouldn't be able to. Storm and Evee had come over and were just sitting there watching us. D-"That's an Evee!!" B-"hahaha yes that's an Evee and your first pokemon." D-"What?" B-"We need to get your hearing checked. I said that was your first pokemon. Congratulations." I took my new pokedex out and scanned Evee. Looking at the screen I noticed a big issue. WTF

Ehhh???? Cliffhanger or just meh. Maybe I should start ending the chapters with a Pokemon narrated ending with the MFVO- Think I'll do that. I mean Morgan Freeman narrating my pokemon adventure is the shit. I don't have to pay him anything. You just mention his name and his voice pops into your head. Did you notice it?

MFVO- On the next adventure of Savage Pokemon World, Will Bash tell us what was on the pokedex screen? Will Delium stay with Bash? What will Evee's name be? Will Bash get to be balls deep in Delium? Stay tuned for the next chapter of Savage Pokemon World.