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I really like the beginning scene. Even though author-nim said it was not a prologue, it summed the beginning of the story well in a way that made me feel like I was there in a second, like snap. I also liked the strength that came with some of the characters, like Vishnu and the lord of preservation. Good stuff so far, author-nim!

Firstly, the description is awesome. You will get a vivid image of the character and what's going on actually. It's pretty awesome in a way, not every author can do it, and power scaling is on point too. The conversations between characters show respect through which it is quite easy to know who overpowers who lol. Which is a great thing. Secondly. Read this novel, Highly recommended,

Please don't mind me, im just here to review my novel hehe, Hope you all enjoyed the reading; if you have any suggestions, feel free to comment down here. Seeya then, I wanna go get my noodles!

The grammar is not the best and the descriptions feel incomplete. A solution to bad grammar is that you could download Grammarly. The world building is awsome. Well I recommend this novel to everyone.

i like the world background gonna be fire this masterpiece

SPOILER***The novel has few chapters but is very interesting. the introduction is really good. the way characters are depicted is very good especially the gods. but my biggest issue with the novel is that the sacrifice of the grand master doesn't seem to have any affect at all so far maybe that will change later in the story . Overall I think this book is good and worth a read.

cool cover, even tho the story is just 2 chapters now but i could see the potential in it , the writing style is beautifully done and the concept is promising . i loved how the master sage sacrificed himself for the safety of his people and i can't wait to see his new journey . can't wait for more chapters

I like this new concept introduced here in the book. The language in the conversation between the people, among whom, while conversing respect is must, the way the author have presented it brings forward the reverence the speaker has towards the one whom he is speaking. Though there are other books too which do this, but they bring it forward in a way that it might become a hindrance for some people who are not of that surrounding to feel it, but this way brings it forward that almost everyone would understand it. But the emotions are not that elaborated in the story. Though the story development is nice till now, but a little more effort in describing the background and the emotions would bring out a great effect and help making the imagination, which a reader has in mind while reading, more vivid.

Keep it up~ I loved it, I'm looking forward to it more. I'll bw waiting for the update! <3

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man the opening is really unique and the concept also good .You should upload more chapter that is the only problem i seen from your novel. Really this is a fine 😊😊 novel 🥰🥰

Awesome story with an easy-to-understand writing style. The plot is something I dont normally read , but I still find it enjoyable and very pleasing to read . 5/5 I will recommend reading it

waiting for more update to know the next one.

Early on in the novel, but we can feel the emotions of the characters involved. Author seems to have potential, will be looking out for more updates.