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National Beastmaster: Chronicles of Bai Zian

Bai Zian's odyssey through the epochs of national beasts was marked by an unparalleled advantage – resources, wealth, and connections bestowed by his esteemed Grandpa, one of the seven strongest individuals globally. A twist of destiny further favored him with the mythical talent [Eye of Apocalypse], granting him profound insights into the world's secrets. [Ding! Enlightenment obtained while studying the white-scaled fish's evolution!] [First Evolution Plan: Second evolution transforms into a red-eyed silver-striped fish (Gold Level)] [Second Evolution Plan: Three evolutions lead to a red-eyed golden fish (Diamond Level)] [And so on...] [Ninth Evolutionary Plan: Nine evolutions culminate in the divine form of a Nine-Day Kunpeng (God-Level)] In the realm of immortals, Bai Zian's journey unfolded with an inevitability that transcended defeat. The question wasn't how to win but rather, how could one possibly lose when destiny itself charted the course of his evolution? It is not my story it is an MTL. I am just (heavily) editing it and adding a couple of things here and there. You can read the MTL on MTLNation (National Beast: Awakening Mythical Talent at the Start)

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Size Ruyi

Old man Bai, is this your talented grandson?" Chi Lianyan inquired, eyeing Bai Zian beside Bai Jingchong, seemingly trying to unravel Bai Zian's identity.

To be frank, Chi Lianyan noticed the young man beside Bai Jingchong when they were at the city gate. This was uncommon, as Chi Lianyan had never seen Bai Jingchong with a child before.

Considering the recent news from Bailin City, Chi Lianyan speculated about the newcomers with high qualifications related to Bailin City's city owner. However, Bai Jingchong had kept the details of Bai Zian and Feng Qianyu concealed, leaving Chi Lianyan curious.

"Yes, this is my grandson Bai Zian. He's in need of an avian companion. This trip to Scarlet Wing City includes searching for a suitable spirit beast for him," Bai Jingchong responded openly, disclosing the additional reason for their visit.

Chi Lianyan continued the conversation, suggesting that the first spirit beast for the Bai family would likely be of the water system, indicating Bai Zian's advancement to the black iron level and readiness to contract a second spirit beast. Bai Jingchong acknowledged, emphasizing the strength of the Bai family.

Chi Lianyan expressed surprise at Bai Zian's progress, contemplating a friendly competition between their grandchildren to determine the stronger one.

Bai Jingchong, seemingly provoked, initially entertained the idea but swiftly shifted the discussion to another matter. He proposed a unique wager: if Bai Zian won, Chi Lianyan would allow him to choose a spirit beast cub from the Chi family's Scarlet Crow Valley.

Chi Lianyan hesitated, aware of the significance of the Scarlet Crow Valley to his family. However, Bai Jingchong, with confidence, proposed the wager, suggesting that if Bai Zian lost, the Bai family would provide a white scale fish cub.

The wager was settled, to be decided in a fight three days later. Chi Lianyan agreed, and the conversation moved away from the bet. Bai Jingchong and Chi Lianyan discussed various topics, from the Mysterious World of Ten Thousand Spider Nests to past adventures.

As night fell, Bai Jingchong and Bai Zian stayed in a Chi family villa. Bai Jingchong seized the opportunity to speak with Bai Zian privately.

"Xiao An, the fight the day after tomorrow is a good opportunity. The Red Crow Valley of the Chi family is a good place with many birds and spirit beasts of high quality. You might find your favorite spirit beast there," Bai Jingchong advised.

"I know, Grandpa. I'll make the most of this opportunity," Bai Zian assured.

Bai Zian, appreciating Bai Jingchong's intentions, also needed to prepare. Despite Chi Lianyan's granddaughter's rumored strength, Bai Zian wanted to ensure the White Shadow Giant Scale Fish was at its best. He took out three rubber-boned ape crystal nuclei, planning to enhance the giant fish's abilities.

Summoning the giant white shadow fish, Bai Zian prepared to let it absorb the crystal nuclei. He was confident that, based on his [Eye of Apocalypse], the water-based giant scale fish could indeed gain skills from the rubber-boned ape nuclei. With determination, Bai Zian proceeded to strengthen the White Shadow Giant Scale Fish for the upcoming challenge.

 

 

 

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"Old man Bai, is this your talented grandson?" Chi Lianyan inquired, eyeing Bai Zian beside Bai Jingchong, seemingly trying to unravel Bai Zian's identity.

To be frank, Chi Lianyan noticed the young man beside Bai Jingchong when they were at the city gate. This was uncommon, as Chi Lianyan had never seen Bai Jingchong with a child before.

Considering the recent news from Bailin City, Chi Lianyan speculated about the newcomers with high qualifications related to Bailin City's city owner. However, Bai Jingchong had kept the details of Bai Zian and Feng Qianyu concealed, leaving Chi Lianyan curious.

"Yes, this is my grandson, Bai Zian. He's in need of an avian companion. This trip to Scarlet Wing City includes searching for a suitable spirit beast for him," Bai Jingchong responded openly, disclosing the additional reason for their visit.

Chi Lianyan continued the conversation, suggesting that the first spirit beast for the Bai family would likely be of the water system, indicating Bai Zian's advancement to the black iron level and readiness to contract a second spirit beast. Bai Jingchong acknowledged, emphasizing the strength of the Bai family.

Chi Lianyan expressed surprise at Bai Zian's progress, contemplating a friendly competition between their grandchildren to determine the stronger one.

Bai Jingchong, seemingly provoked, initially entertained the idea but swiftly shifted the discussion to another matter. He proposed a unique wager: if Bai Zian won, Chi Lianyan would allow him to choose a spirit beast cub from the Chi family's Scarlet Crow Valley.

Chi Lianyan hesitated, aware of the significance of the Scarlet Crow Valley to his family. However, Bai Jingchong, with confidence, proposed the wager, suggesting that if Bai Zian lost, the Bai family would provide a white scale fish cub.

The wager was settled, to be decided in a fight three days later. Chi Lianyan agreed, and the conversation moved away from the bet. Bai Jingchong and Chi Lianyan discussed various topics, from the Mysterious World of Ten Thousand Spider Nests to past adventures.

As night fell, Bai Jingchong and Bai Zian stayed in a Chi family villa. Bai Jingchong seized the opportunity to speak with Bai Zian privately.

"Xiao An, the fight the day after tomorrow is a good opportunity. The Red Crow Valley of the Chi family is a good place with many birds and spirit beasts of high quality. You might find your favorite spirit beast there," Bai Jingchong advised.

"I know, Grandpa. I'll make the most of this opportunity," Bai Zian assured.

Bai Zian, appreciating Bai Jingchong's intentions, also needed to prepare. Despite Chi Lianyan's granddaughter's rumored strength, Bai Zian wanted to ensure the White Shadow Giant Scale Fish was at its best. He took out three rubber-boned ape crystal nuclei, planning to enhance the giant fish's abilities.

Summoning the giant white shadow fish, Bai Zian prepared to let it absorb the crystal nuclei. He was confident that, based on his [Eye of Apocalypse], the water-based giant scale fish could indeed gain skills from the rubber-boned ape nuclei. With determination, Bai Zian proceeded to strengthen the White Shadow Giant Scale Fish for the upcoming challenge.

Swallowing the core of the rubber-boned ape, the giant white-shadowed fish closed its eyes and began to digest the energy in the core.

Time flies, and a little time passes.

When the white shadow giant scale fish opened his eyes, there was a trace of loss in his eyes.

Don't say more; the white shadow giant scale fish failed and did not absorb the "big and small" skills.

Bai Zian's expression remained calm, without the slightest disturbance. Obtaining new skills through a crystal nucleus involves a certain degree of difficulty, and success is not guaranteed.

Without expressing disappointment, Bai Zian took out the second crystal nucleus and threw it into the mouth of the giant white shadow fish.

The white shadow giant scale fish began the absorption process again.

When the white shadow giant scale fish opened its eyes after the second attempt, there seemed to be a hint of loss.

The second absorption also failed, and this time, Bai Zian's expression showed a touch of disappointment.

"Sure enough, there is no preparation; it is difficult to directly absorb the crystal nucleus and acquire skills. If only I had prepared in advance in Bailin City to increase the probability of absorption," Bai Zian murmured to himself.

Bai Zian didn't let the setback deter him. Determined to try one last time, he took out the last rubber-bone ape crystal nucleus and threw it into the giant white shadow fish's mouth.

The third attempt began, and Bai Zian anxiously waited.

When the white shadow giant scale fish opened its eyes again, this time, there was a glint of excitement. Success!

Bai Zian couldn't hide his joy, and he used the Eye of Apocalypse to verify the newly acquired skill.

[Race]: White Shadow Giant Scale Fish (Water System)

[Realm]: Primary Black Iron

[Talents]: Royal Speed (S), Power of Yin and Nether (S), Water Rupture (A), Phantom Lost (A)

[Qualification]: Senior King

[Skills]: Waterproof Speed (Purple・Introduction), Nether Water Erosion (Purple・Introduction), Water Rupture (Blue・Xiaocheng), Illusory White Shadow (Blue・Introduction), Water Gun Impact (Green・Xiaocheng), Foam Layer (Green・Dacheng), Size Ruyi (Blue)

"Success! The White Shadow Giant Scale Fish has mastered the 'Size Ruyi' skill. With this, its strength will become even stronger," Bai Zian exclaimed with delight.

Pleased with the outcome, Bai Zian commanded, "White Shadow Giant Scale Fish, use Size Ruyi."

(Size Ruyi may be referred to as Xiao Ruyi)

The giant white shadow fish responded to Bai Zian's command, swaying and gradually shrinking in size until it reached about two and a half meters.

"Enough, this size is sufficient to suppress the pet beast of Chi Lianyan City Lord's granddaughter," Bai Zian concluded, satisfied with the result.

Feeling accomplished, Bai Zian spent the night helping the White Shadow Giant Scale Fish practice the Size Ruyi skill, preparing for the upcoming challenges.

As the night passed and a new day began, Bai Zian looked a bit fatigued. Bai Jingchong advised him to rest, considering there was still time before the auction and gambling event.

"No need, Grandpa. Let's explore the market in Scarlet Wing City," Bai Zian insisted, eager to seize the opportunity to find valuable items.

Agreeing to Bai Zian's enthusiasm, Bai Jingchong accompanied his grandson to the market in Chiyi City.

As they strolled through the market, various prompts about items appeared, guiding Bai Zian to potential treasures.

When Bai Zian noticed an orange-red spirit beast egg, he recognized it as an amethyst-level potential bird-type spirit beast egg. Despite not contracting it immediately, Bai Zian knew it met his requirements and decided to buy it.

Excited about his find, Bai Zian continued exploring the market, determined to make the most of the opportunities in Scarlet Wing City.