My life in Danmachi

Too early for a full review but I'll just write a half-baked review as of Chapter 16. This fanfic definitely has a lot of aspects to like with the best one imo being the fact that the MC is a hybrid of Elf and Dwarf, so he's a half-elf and half-dwarf. I see a lot of MC's have blacksmithing traits to them but never really actually being related to an actual dwarf or even a half one. (Writing Quality) (5/5) As for the Grammar, I haven't spotted any mistakes and even if there were any, its so minor and still 100% readable. (Update Consistency) (4/5) Based on the upload dates, it doesn't seem to be daily but mostly every several days which is alright I guess. (Story) (4.5/5) MC is a homie and saves his friend from the infamous Truck-kun, much to God's displeasure and is sent to the Danmachi world as a Half-Elf and Half-Dwarf. Although the time he is sent to isn't exactly close to the original start of the series. The story takes place around 10 years before Bell's arrival as of the latest chapter and due to unfortunate circumstances the MC and his parents become enslaved for a bit but is saved. Afterwards they travel to Orario and arrive there, officially starting the MC's Orario life. (Just to note, the slave part only serves as the driving point to traveling to Orario and plus he does not get pushed around at all and actually dominates the raider/enslaver familia you can say. There is also the option of skipping the slave part if you really hate it that badly but I wouldn't recommended it and its not that long too.) (Another thing to mention Like the author said, his friend being mentioned to be reincarnated in MHA was just a joke and shouldn't take it seriously since I know many others like myself hate multiple MC's/Reincarnated.) (Characters) (4.5/5) Kova Nact, the MC is charismatic, seems to flirt a good amount and generally knows what he's doing. He's definitely not the smoothest person on the street but not the worst either. Before reincarnating, he only read the first chapter of the light novel/book of Danmachi so he's quite new to the whole world generally. I'm not sure what else to say about him but I think a majority of people won't dislike him as a MC probably. His parents, a Dwarf and a Elf obviously surprisingly don't die and stay with the plot which is a fine addition as most parents are either left behind or die. You can already guess what familia he's joining and a few of the recurring characters he'll meet based on the chapter titling so no need to talk about that. I would say the OC's feel alive and aren't robots, with the Danmachi characters keeping their original personality/behavior mostly but I need some more chapters of character interactions for a more firm opinion on that. World Background (4/5) Well its the Danmachi world, not really much to say. If you don't know Danmachi then just know that's it mostly just centered around one part of the world only.

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Honestly one of better danmaxhi fan fics so far my only problem is that the mc is still very young so I dont know how the story will progress without any larger time skips but still a very enjoyable read

Amazing fanfic, love the mc and how he interacts with others. The grammar is alsp amazing. Hopefully you can continue writing this story for a while.

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Well... my first impression of this quite good. I like a lot that the author took his time to answer properly each review and comments on his chapters. This makes me feel confident that the author is serious about this and MAY not drop it. I also hope that the author research things properly. Such as the timeline of things. Such as... 9 years BB (before bell arrives to orario). Ais joins loki, 7 years BB, ais becomes lecel 3 and Ottar lvl 7. 5 years BB tiona and tione join loki and Ryuu goes on a rampage over the death of her fellow members, causing Evilus to be almost completely destroyed and the like. Its not hard as you only need to search "danmachi timeline" to check the events. It also helps author if he wants to change some of these due to mc actions. I have read the novel andnplayed the game so i look forward to what effects mc actions will have.

I'm not a fan of reincarnation stories (Mc growing up since birth) but is going really well. I'm liking specially the personality of the protagonist and the way he 'talks'. The interaction between characters are good too, they don't fell dull. A nice grammar and update stability are a appreciated plus. Also good notes author 👌

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Nicely done👌👌👌👌😌😌😌😌👌👌👌👌😌😌😌😌😌👌👌👌👌😌😌😌😌👌👌👌👌😌😌😌😌👌👌👌👌😌😌😌😌👌👌👌👌😌😌😌😌👌👌👌👌😌😌😌😌👌👌👌👌😌😌😌😌👌👌👌👌😌😌😌😌👌👌👌👌😌😌😌😌👌👌👌👌😌😌😌😌

I'm trying to be more supportive, so I'm writing more reviews even when I don't have much to say about this fic, good jokes (Or I am too childish, but hey, at least I'm happy) good ideas, some nice moments and characters seem to be in line with their original selfs... a great read and if you have some time to kill, definitely whort your time

Heck reviewing, I like rating, and I like this book. Keep it up! Heck reviewing, I like rating, and I like this book. Keep it up! Heck reviewing, I like rating, and I like this book. Keep it up! Heck reviewing, I like rating, and I like this book. Keep it up!

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One of the best danmachi ff that i read so far. I just wish there are more chapters per week but its better than none. Keep up the good work author-san 🙂🙂

Very good fanfic. It has charactar it has story and it has comedy.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Some of the best you'll find around, honestly. Oozing with personality that reeks of a talented writer. It's hard to find a Danmachi fic of the same level, in fact I think the only other one that competes in quality is Elemantalist in the Dungeon. Good stuff, keep it up! A selfish question from a typical Webnovel reader if you are willing to respond: Will his magic extend beyond the typical Falna/Chant territory and into that ancient magic you mentioned earlier?

Muy buen la historia y todo me gusta sería bueno que aiz conociera primero al protagonista y se enamorara👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍además puede tener magia ereba

you had to make it a harem didnt you... is it because you are inexperienced on how male and females interact with each other or just because you are unable to write a meaningful interaction between people? 5 stars because i know creation is hard

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WAS worth the waiting for

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