NO_GUDLv52yr

2022-03-02 07:20

Too early for a full review but I'll just write a half-baked review as of Chapter 16. This fanfic definitely has a lot of aspects to like with the best one imo being the fact that the MC is a hybrid of Elf and Dwarf, so he's a half-elf and half-dwarf. I see a lot of MC's have blacksmithing traits to them but never really actually being related to an actual dwarf or even a half one. (Writing Quality) (5/5) As for the Grammar, I haven't spotted any mistakes and even if there were any, its so minor and still 100% readable. (Update Consistency) (4/5) Based on the upload dates, it doesn't seem to be daily but mostly every several days which is alright I guess. (Story) (4.5/5) MC is a homie and saves his friend from the infamous Truck-kun, much to God's displeasure and is sent to the Danmachi world as a Half-Elf and Half-Dwarf. Although the time he is sent to isn't exactly close to the original start of the series. The story takes place around 10 years before Bell's arrival as of the latest chapter and due to unfortunate circumstances the MC and his parents become enslaved for a bit but is saved. Afterwards they travel to Orario and arrive there, officially starting the MC's Orario life. (Just to note, the slave part only serves as the driving point to traveling to Orario and plus he does not get pushed around at all and actually dominates the raider/enslaver familia you can say. There is also the option of skipping the slave part if you really hate it that badly but I wouldn't recommended it and its not that long too.) (Another thing to mention Like the author said, his friend being mentioned to be reincarnated in MHA was just a joke and shouldn't take it seriously since I know many others like myself hate multiple MC's/Reincarnated.) (Characters) (4.5/5) Kova Nact, the MC is charismatic, seems to flirt a good amount and generally knows what he's doing. He's definitely not the smoothest person on the street but not the worst either. Before reincarnating, he only read the first chapter of the light novel/book of Danmachi so he's quite new to the whole world generally. I'm not sure what else to say about him but I think a majority of people won't dislike him as a MC probably. His parents, a Dwarf and a Elf obviously surprisingly don't die and stay with the plot which is a fine addition as most parents are either left behind or die. You can already guess what familia he's joining and a few of the recurring characters he'll meet based on the chapter titling so no need to talk about that. I would say the OC's feel alive and aren't robots, with the Danmachi characters keeping their original personality/behavior mostly but I need some more chapters of character interactions for a more firm opinion on that. World Background (4/5) Well its the Danmachi world, not really much to say. If you don't know Danmachi then just know that's it mostly just centered around one part of the world only.

My life in Danmachi

IronOwl

4.8

43 Chs