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Mr. System, I Love You

In the brink of death, Eva, a 16-year old orphan peasant in the Kingdom of S'alazar, was resigned to dying due to the cold in her mostly empty shack in the slums outside the border of the City of Maine, that is, until she heard a voice in her head that would change the course of her life, or the world for that matter. Used to the grit needed to overcome the harshness of this world, but now equipped with a System (with a handsomely alluring voice) who filled the gaps of her human weaknesses, Eva easily grows in power and strength. Interestingly, she soon discovers that, not only does she now find in herself the desire to conquer the world with the ability to do so, but she is now also dead-set in conquering her System's heart. *** Many thanks to So_mi for the wonderful cover! ?

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4.1: The King

At the Royal Court inside the palace of the Kingdom of S'alazar, a man of old age was sitting on a huge throne made of multicolored gems.

Light from the windows spilled from one side of the fifty feet tall room and passed through the gems, making colored lights dance against the marble floor and white ceiling.

The old man looked onto the floor, one hand against his cheek, and the other dangling off the golden armrest with a glass of glowing liquor in the other.

On a normal day, looking into the old man's eyes will make one feel utter admiration, for that kind of depth can only belong to the eyes of a seasoned warrior. This was a perfect example of how a person with wisdom, power, & innate cruelty looked.

Yet today, for some reason, the usually solid gaze looked bleak.

The king's arm dropped from his cheek as he brought himself up, still carressing the glass. He now walked towards a portrait on the wall opposite the windows.

He stopped for a moment in front of the picture, at first not daring to look.

But as he lifted his eyes, he felt his guts churn, and his frown went deeper.

"Mara..." His deep voice cracked at the mention of his beloved Queen. That, although not dead, was equally grieved by the King and the people, because of her having been in a coma for several years.

The King exuded despair through every pore of his body as he caressed her face, seemingly remembering something.

"Mara, it was today." The glass under the King's trembling hand was emptied before it shattered.

The king's teeth ground against each other as he looked at the woman with pain & regret.

"It was today." He pounded on the wall, leaving a dent beside the frame.

"Today..." His soft whimpers faded with every tear and blood that dripped on the floor.

Just thought I'd give a mini chapter as a thank you for the encouragement given to me at this early stage of my novel.

But of course, this isn't included in the 7 promised chapters of the week. ? Just note that this is an important piece of bacon.

I decided I will just upload two or three chapters tomorrow. I'm having a hard time writing fast but keeping things light. I dont wanna be a bore with so many info dumps. ❌ I keep deleting. Lol

Have you guys have had a similar experience? ?

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