MCU: Viltrumite

in the summary, u say the mc doesn't know he is Viltrumite is that because he doesn't know about the invincible comic in his past life or just hasn't released it yet? also, are the Viltrumite people alive and a thing in this universe or is he the only Viltrumite?

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So far so good there story is worth the read or at least worth to put in your library until there are more chapters(chapter4 right now)

This a really good fic just read first 3 chapters.............................................................................................................................................................................................

Pretty good story that is easily readable. Sucks that there haven't been any updates in a while. It looked pretty good. ...................

is this dropped? hope not. ................................................................................................................

One of the better Marvel fan fics with quite a bit of potential .............................................................................................

It is simply perfect, the writing quality is a pleasure for the eyes, the story’s awesome, the main character is coherent and likeable, while the secondary characters aren’t too shallow. The world is properly described. This kind of fanfics makes all the shit i saw in this website worth it. Yes, dc reinhard i am looking at you, give me back my feelings !. Anyway, Kudos for ya author ! i am waiting for more chapters.

well the story is amazing... till now the story isn't fast paced or forced... it's nice and the first ever that I have seen a viltrumite as mc... nice power.... I JUST HOPE YOU WILL NOT DROP IT AND CONTINUE FOR A LONG TIME....😂😂😂

great story, so far I've caught up with all the chapters and I can safely say this story is great, the grammar is great, story development is great, everything about this story is great and I can't wait for more updates.

This review was posted when chapters just reached 5 in no. so don't expect it to give a great deal of idea as to what happens in the novel, so far it has been world building and getting to know characters which is good in my opinion as most fanfics skip that and fail to show how characters behave. The author has been respectful to the original material and I Hope that continues, there is nothing worse than a fanfic that screws the characters. MC is certainly relatable and nice. Now with that out of the way , I can't express how happy I am with a novel about viltrumite from invicible. It's great that its getting the love it deserves, it my favourite franchise.

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I am not very good at writing reviews but it is a great fanfic (which is very difficult to find), in which the story seems to flow, unlike most fics where the story seems somewhat forced and boring.

i love the idea alot but I'm scared for the future as people figure out his weakness, the mad titan and the asgardians and other knowledge and long-lived and powerful race will have surely figured out this race's weakness so he should either find a way to improve himself to be impervious to their attacks and schemes or should build something to help him for this inevitability or he should find a mystical solution maybe sorcery is the answer

This is nice

Love it can’t wait for more. —————————-—————————-—————————-—————————-—————————-—————————-—————————-—————————-—————————-—————————-—————————-—————————-—————————-—————————-

Good story, sadly it is dropped I think. Why do all the invincible fanfics get dropped they all have really goid starts to. Unlucky. hsnnss

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This is a really entertaining story. The main character is fun and interesting, how he struggles with his powers and when he finally could let a bit out. Very cool!