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Great chapter, even better story. Keep it up because i am loving it!
Now this is a fanfiction i can get behind, a no-harem story so rare to find. Keep up the great work! looking forward to read the rest of the story if it keep this quality i am very happy!
What strawhats? i thought they were called dream team. Story has been fun to read so far. a few mistakes here and there but wonderful work keep up the good work!
I really enjoyed reading this story, you have captured my interest. Looking forward to read mkr3!
Cool story, for me personally there is a bit much Comedy. This story so far has´t taken itself to seriously and it makes it hard for me to get into it. You have done a great job writing it and its a cool premise. Good luck and I wish you the best!
Deepseek is that you? :D
Would be better to first use the devil fruit then take the pill 💊?
You are brave as author, because this story is going against what many would have wanted. There are many questions, like why he did nothing at all. Seams so weird! Well hope you can withstand the opposing opinions. That aside, i thought he would have done something. I did enjoy that you have gone with a different timeline, having him start before Harry Potter becomes the Boy who lived.
Though this weakness is usually referred to as the inability to swim, more accurately Devil Fruit users become helpless after being submerged in any kind of still water, not just seawater, because any body of water can be considered an extension of the "sea". The inability to move their body in the sea is simply a byproduct of that weakness so if you are strong enough you will be able to move.
Decided to post what wrote, its little over 100 thousand words, so around 50 chapters. Enjoy!