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This story has its issues, but if you can focus on the good parts and over look the other, the it's an okay read. Will be interesting to see homelander and the main character meet for the first time.

The Synopsis is wrong he doesn't wake up in the Aiel waste but in Two Rivers. It started of okay but it feels very AI in parts. I got no issues with AI as long as you edit it. The author should really update/read up on his lore because things that happen in this story is so far from canon it gets unbelievable. Take Black Ajah, it's gets discussed openly by the main character and not one Aes Sedai bats an eye. But according to the lore of Black Ajah and it's reports of its existence have been vehemently denied by the White Tower for millennia. It's good to see another wheel of time fanfiction, even though it's has some problems.

Gohan???

This is a fun story, I enjoyed reading it. I like the system and the main character gets fun new abilities that he puts to good use. A good DC fanfiction, that I would recommend

Well i loved reading this story, so much fun and much more readable then the canon book series. I really enjoyed my time reading this story, very cool and so fun. Keep up the great work!

When i see that name, I only think of one character :D

This story started of pretty good, but the system the main character has becomes an after thought under used and more or less forgotten. It pops up here and there but nothing comes from it, there has been no pay off after 50 + chapters. The first part of this story is good, but after a certain incident it just goes downhill from there.

This is where I stop reading, to many plot errors for my enjoyment. Season 1 Episode 12 where he finds out about the mystery person Moriarty. Anyway good luck with your writing.

The main character has its issues and he doesn't learn from his mistakes. He gets a brutal reality check at the beginning but then keeps making similar mistakes over and over. It's becomes very frustrating to read and then it goes of from the main character and on starts to loose intresst in the story. The author needs to focus on the main character, needs to condense the plot. The author does a good job in making living in viltrumite empire very brutal and totalarism. I think for a first draft this is okay job, are the some points the author needs to work on sure but over all I think it's an okay read.

I don't get it? Why does he go around saying he is half Witcher. It doesn't make any sense. How is that any of their business. It so strange. Don't get me wrong it's interesting story. But it's the small things that bug me.