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MAHABHARAT: FREEDOM FROM NIYATI!

Karna, the mighty warrior of Dvapara Yuga (A period in Sanatana) was killed by his half-brother Arjuna, under the guidance of Lord Krishna was given a chance by Maa Shakti (The Greatest Celestial Entity in Hinduism) to make up for his mistakes. For which, he has to live through the worst lives and survive without his memories... He will have to bear the harshest Karma, far worse than the torture of hell itself! After passing her test, Karna is now ready to face the world who refused to acknowledge his might! Maa Shakti granted him the greatest boon, Freedom from the shackles of Niyati (Destiny) herself!

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Prakriti's P.O.V,

After welcoming the caravan of Maharathi Bhishma, Guru Kripacharya, Devi Kunti and the Pandavas, Devi Satyavati instructed Devi Gandhari, "Bahu (Daughter in law), escort Bhishma and young Kumars (Princes) to the dining room. Us old women will come with Chhoti-Bahu (Devi Kunti)."

[Note: I am aware of Mata Satyavati's relation with both Devi Kunti and Devi Gandhari i.e. Pautra Bahu (Wife of Grandson). But, it seemed unnatural to use it in a conversation. right?]

"Very well, Maha-Mata." Devi Gandhari obediently agreed to Devi Satyavati's order and addressed the maids, "Maids, escort my dear nephews, Kul guru, and your excellency to the dining room.^^" 

"Yes! Your Majesty!"x5

"Your excellency, this way please~"

The maid politely led everyone but the ladies and Emperor Dhritarashtra who followed along with the support of Shri Adiratha.

Though, it was not Shri Adhiratha's work, he just happened to be with the Emperor before the arrival of the caravan.

Therefore, he have to escort the emperor due to his inability. 

Maybe, these coincidences are all connected by a single thread driven by Niyati who intends to gather everyone at a single place?

...

A few moments after the departure of all, Devi Satyavati took Devi Kunti into her chamber along with Devi Ambalika and Devi Ambika.

Devi Gandhari stood on her place until they left before heading towards the dining room. After all, She can't be delay to treat her nephews and little servants with some delicious food. Now can she?

Therefore, with the guidance of Devi Radha, they headed towards the very place they came from or... The place which serve its purpose as first intersection between the Antagonist and the protagonists!

...

During the time the Pandavas were on their way towards the dining hall,

Devi Sughada reached the imperial chamber, only to observe the funny spectacle of a silvery dove flying in the sky while making weird poses.

All the while, Karna kept praising Aarav with cheesy lines as he lazily laid on the sofa placed in one corner of the chamber.

"Brother, Now you look like a real dove!"

"Keep going! You are the celestial beast!"

"Woah! What a great dive!"

...

Pfft~

Despite her self-control, She was unable to stop a gentle chuckle that escaped from her little mouth, earning the dissatisfaction of Aarav as a consequence.

"Coo!" [Note: Sorry. No subtitles available.]

Flap~

Flap~

Aarav flew back to his rightful place and sat there with his beak turned to the side, his way to show his dissatisfaction.

Creating an awkward silence in chamber.

However, Devi Sughada had ample experience as a mother, therefore she was aware of the freckle nature of a child. 

Thereby, She ignored Aarav's dissatisfaction and addressed both of them, "Ahem* Karna, Aarav, Let me escort you to the dining hall. Her highness and Sister Radha is waiting for you~"

"!"

The words 'Sister Radha' successfully dissolved Aarav's dissatisfaction and replaced it by eagerness to be fed my Devi Radha.

"Coo~!" (Brother, lets go!)

It made him to drag (Figuratively) Karna to the gates of the dining room!

Unaware of the unexpected encounter waiting for them~

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To be continued...

Let me apologize for the delay...

"I'm sorryyyy!!!"

I will post more chaps tomorrow~

Can I?

My laptop is running a little low on fuel, plus, there's no electricity...

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