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King of the east universe

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อ่านนิยาย King of the east universe โดย ผู้เขียน samadetuyi ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.he is the king of the east universe and he as to protect the east universe with his friends and his father if he fails then the east universe is doomed...

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he is the king of the east universe and he as to protect the east universe with his friends and his father if he fails then the east universe is doomed

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The Fantasy Maker

Emily Kendricks is a writer of romance and crime fiction. Her first two novels, The Fantasy Maker and Badge Without Honor, earned her spots on Goodreads. Growing up in Pittsburgh, PA, Emily never quite felt like she fit in. Soon after completing her education at Penn State, with a Law Enforcement major, she and her new husband moved to New York City. She found The Big Apple to be a perfect fit! There, Emily started a new life as wife, mother and author. Despite her love for reading great crime novels, Emily found that she preferred creating her own nail-biting plots! Her focus is on strong female character development and compelling storylines. A widowed mother of two, Emily is now settling into the next phase of her own life. She lives with her Chihuahua rescue, Chloe. An erotic thriller that is part Fifty Shades of Grey and part Sweet Little Lies, with a character driven exploration of pleasure, sensuality, infinite eroticism and political repercussions. Thirty-four year old Emma Hamilton’s life is comfortable and predictable, right up to the moment she reluctantly enters “The Ranch”, an exclusive club where the wives of the ultra-rich and powerful surrender all inhibitions to meet every tantalizing desire. Far outside her element, Emma is initially swept away by the secret society that promises community, infinite eroticism and the fulfillment of every sexual desire limited only by the imagination. However, she soon discovers that her afternoon of pleasure comes at a shockingly high price. The more she learns about the “members only” club, the more she realizes the dangers lurking just behind the façade of sexual indulgence. With her family, life and the career of one of the most promising politicians in the country on the line, Emma goes up against a cadre of powerful players hell bent on silencing her before she destroys them all.

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จำนวน 2 :west universe and the great beast
จำนวน 3 :south universe and the white knight
จำนวน 4 :the last war

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

This story has potential by the way. But at least make it more lengthy or don't come short below 800 words. I recommend it to have between 1.5 to 800 words to make the flow of the story to be slower and its pacing will improve. What I do to mine was don't fall on 1000 words. But hey! your story is so awesome! A big wave of readers will come for your novel in the future!

Little_Foxxy
Little_FoxxyLv12Little_Foxxy

Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.

Temmy_Adetuyi
Temmy_AdetuyiLv1Temmy_Adetuyi

I like the book and I also feel connected to the characters the world-building also make me feel like I am there when I read the book I enjoy it

uhjuihoijio
uhjuihoijioLv1uhjuihoijio

I think the story definitely has potential. I can see the world and the characters been built. I would just suggest the use of more paragraphs and punctuation to improve the flow of the story. But overall good job. Keep at it :D

CalypsoDay
CalypsoDayLv1CalypsoDay

The story has a good start. You do have to work a bit more on your writing skills. I would've liked if the chapters were a bit longer, but that's not something to seriously worry about. Some paragraphs don't start with capital letters, and in my opinion, you should correct that. There are also a few grammatical errors, though nothing serious. Pay a bit more attention and your writing will definitely improve. Keep it up!

Wolfgirl1215
Wolfgirl1215Lv2Wolfgirl1215

I think this story has strong world building and a lot of promising description. Its very fun to read, though there are a few grammatical errors, I just wish there were longer chapters!

Limpin_Technocat
Limpin_TechnocatLv3Limpin_Technocat

good going so far, the story is promising. XD seeing a lot of rookie mistakes though, like breaking up the paragraphs properly and grammar, but it doesn't take away from the book. Fix these mistakes and you'll go far

Susan001
Susan001Lv1Susan001

Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com  (delete *)We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.

modulationi
modulationiLv1modulationi

Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.

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