In Your Arms Forever

Mystery! That's what this story is. Unlike other stories I have read, the ML is independent, has a mysterious past, and lot of local elders and friends. I like the storyline sofar. Wondering how FL is going to link in all of this! My only suggestion to author - use an editor or translator. Having read so many novels here, grammatical errors are not a problem, but a word drastically misspelled is a problem, esp when it happens often. This not going to stop me from reading this novel. Also to keep our interest, better to update a few chapters a day instead of just one!

One of my friends recomend it and i am thankfull of that . Really amazing story . If u are a person who like long narration of scene ..... strong relationship between friends .... untold story of past .... struggle ..... then this story is written for u ...... Ml's charector is good . Has awsm friends , gardian, buuuuuut FL is still missing😑😑😑😑 hope she arrive soon🤗🤗🤗

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I like this story . Very musterious . 😮😮😮 but at the same time explain feeling of love between friends beatifully . Description is tooo long since i am a impatient type of person so usully skip those (sorry😖😖😖)...I was waiting for fl before write a review so here i am .....i like both ofMC (specially the surname of ML ..... OBEROI😅😅😅😅) ALL THE BEST dear author ...

Hello viewers. I really appreciates this novel . Storyline is awesome and the continuous thrill of mystery is way too cool. I prefer this book to those who have a bit of patience coz the stroy needs some chapters for character development and plot making. By the way even if you are not having patience I'm telling you give it a try, coz I know you can't resist this book after trying it. A little bit of grammatical mistakes can be seen but as we all know nobody is perfect so please be kind and avoid such petty things. I am literally a big fan of this novel. 👏👏👏👏👏

Refreshing storyline Gr8 concepts.... Amazing writing skill.... All in all a must read story.... Dear author please update faster....We are waiting for you,😊😊😊😊

Okay, first your synopsis sells the story and makes me engrossed in it, second, the plot is amazing. Great job author, keep up the good work.

Good introduction. The character of the ML is fairly good, the story is developing nicely and I believe you are biding your time in introducing FL. The world building is good too. Keep it up.

This seems to be an interesting story as the MC is an ML. I rated 4 stars as there were some grammar errors.I suggest have it proofread by someone then.I initially corrected some of it myself to help you out. But over all, this is a great story so Keep it up!

I rarely read novels wherein the MC is the ML. The synopsis has me interested especially about the ML’s background. As far as I’ve read, I’m excited to see how the FL would enter the book. Writing Quality: The author’s native language is probably not english, which is understandable. Based on the chapters, the grammar has been improving. In my opinion, I suggest using an editor or something similar. It doesn’t affect the overall presentation of the story, but I think it could make a great change to your story. Stability of Updates: I’m not sure how frequent the author updates Story Development: As I’m making this review, this book had 20 chapters. It’s rather early to say anything but both the characters and plot have potential.

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Great story. Since i added it to my collection i haven't stop reading it. The writer is quite great with words and description... Good up the good work.

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Hi everyone... The author here... Shamelessly giving myself 5 stars...... I would like to thank you all for your kind support... This is my first novel that I am writing... In Your Arms Forever is a mysterious romance novel with gr8 storyline and many new concepts.... It's based on Indian community as the leads were brought up in India.... Later the story will go on a World Tour as the mysteries unfold themselves.... The story is based on the fact that both the leads are unaware of their origins and are fighting to find and protect it. So I request you all to take a few minutes of your precious time and join me in this new and exciting story that will at some point remind you of your childhood 😊😊😊

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Great story line..... Good emotional environment... Strong Relationship..... Mysterious Past ..... Hidden identities... Reliving the school dayd This is one in all story ....A must read work . Like the starting of the book along with the humor moments....And childish innocence that most people miss during their *****hood.... This book really stirred up all memories of the school life and being a care free child again .... Waiting for the female lead to enter ... Hope the author doesn't disappointed us ...

Read! Read! Read! This story has an amazing and interesting plot. An independent male lead and a loyal friends. Though I am still waiting for the female lead, this story has a good start. And what is amazing about this, is that this is based on an Indian community, if I’m right .😆

The story is so mysterious.. I really like it. The best thing from the story is the description of the friendship. It's so refreshing. Fl is rocking.