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ggone_Lv35yr
2019-08-11 18:55

I rarely read novels wherein the MC is the ML. The synopsis has me interested especially about the ML’s background. As far as I’ve read, I’m excited to see how the FL would enter the book. Writing Quality: The author’s native language is probably not english, which is understandable. Based on the chapters, the grammar has been improving. In my opinion, I suggest using an editor or something similar. It doesn’t affect the overall presentation of the story, but I think it could make a great change to your story. Stability of Updates: I’m not sure how frequent the author updates Story Development: As I’m making this review, this book had 20 chapters. It’s rather early to say anything but both the characters and plot have potential.

In Your Arms Forever

Ayona_midnight
4.5
1 Chs

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Ayona_midnight
Ayona_midnightAuthor

Hi.. please check out the story THE EMBERED ROSE : WHEN DESTINY BRINGS THEM TOGETHER as it is the continuing of IN YOUR ARMS FOREVER

5yr
Over_thehorizon
Over_thehorizonLv3

Hi there I just wanted to recommend this new story I found a few days ago and thought it was worth recommending The Mommy Protecting Devils Flare Up Tyrant Prince's Wife Is A Nymph. This story is participating in the spring contest and till now the work is superb. Check out the work if you're interested

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rskdrama
rskdramaLv6

Mystery! That's what this story is. Unlike other stories I have read, the ML is independent, has a mysterious past, and lot of local elders and friends. I like the storyline sofar. Wondering how FL is going to link in all of this! My only suggestion to author - use an editor or translator. Having read so many novels here, grammatical errors are not a problem, but a word drastically misspelled is a problem, esp when it happens often. This not going to stop me from reading this novel. Also to keep our interest, better to update a few chapters a day instead of just one!

5yr

Radiya_Nadaf
Radiya_NadafLv4

One of my friends recomend it and i am thankfull of that . Really amazing story . If u are a person who like long narration of scene ..... strong relationship between friends .... untold story of past .... struggle ..... then this story is written for u ...... Ml's charector is good . Has awsm friends , gardian, buuuuuut FL is still missing😑😑😑😑 hope she arrive soon🤗🤗🤗

5yr
AlexzY
AlexzYLv3

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5yr
natasha_nut
natasha_nutLv4

I like this story . Very musterious . 😮😮😮 but at the same time explain feeling of love between friends beatifully . Description is tooo long since i am a impatient type of person so usully skip those (sorry😖😖😖)...I was waiting for fl before write a review so here i am .....i like both ofMC (specially the surname of ML ..... OBEROI😅😅😅😅) ALL THE BEST dear author ...

5yr
batti
battiLv4

Hello viewers. I really appreciates this novel . Storyline is awesome and the continuous thrill of mystery is way too cool. I prefer this book to those who have a bit of patience coz the stroy needs some chapters for character development and plot making. By the way even if you are not having patience I'm telling you give it a try, coz I know you can't resist this book after trying it. A little bit of grammatical mistakes can be seen but as we all know nobody is perfect so please be kind and avoid such petty things. I am literally a big fan of this novel. 👏👏👏👏👏

5yr
amlan_banerjee
amlan_banerjeeLv2

Refreshing storyline Gr8 concepts.... Amazing writing skill.... All in all a must read story.... Dear author please update faster....We are waiting for you,😊😊😊😊

5yr
Prettynice22
Prettynice22Lv5

Okay, first your synopsis sells the story and makes me engrossed in it, second, the plot is amazing. Great job author, keep up the good work.

5yr
Primate
PrimateLv4

Good introduction. The character of the ML is fairly good, the story is developing nicely and I believe you are biding your time in introducing FL. The world building is good too. Keep it up.

5yr
marjzach2012
marjzach2012Lv14

This seems to be an interesting story as the MC is an ML. I rated 4 stars as there were some grammar errors.I suggest have it proofread by someone then.I initially corrected some of it myself to help you out. But over all, this is a great story so Keep it up!

5yr
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