Highschool DxD : The Time Devil

It’s an alright story, there’s some stupid things that happened, like the whole underworld knows he has spce-time abilities like as soon as he’s born. I would of thought that the parents would want to keep the space a secret and have it as a trump card, but I guess not. When he’s having accidents with his control over his power they call in someone who is experts in time magic, which again is stupid as the accident was space based as things wear stretched, and why call a time expert when your whole family is a time based power family I would have thought that they were experts. Also in his past life he’s a scientist who’s obsessed with the control of time(that’s his personality basically). Now he’s being engaged to rias who is not smart and only comments about her beauty, i would think he would want smarts more like sona, when asked why not sona the only reason the aurther say no is because she is overused which I have only seen 1 maybe 2(the 2 was a harem). The farther also brings the mc to political meetings(he does not know he’s a person from another world) so a parent takes there 2 year old to a political meeting about his future(marriage) which i would think would make the child think he’s only being used(again the parents do not know he’s a person from another world).

hello everyone, Author here, please do read the story..😁😁

The story is very interesting, there is rarely dxd fiction about a ber reincarnated into a demon from one of the 72 great clans plus another mc ber reincarnated into agares one of the strongest clans in dxd but rarely shown

Keep up the good work.... Great story. Fghrghrryuduishsgsjwhwtwuwiwgghwjshsghwhwgffusjwggejsjshshsuijhgghhhhhhhggffhhhddgfdjhddykbdtugddtuhhggyyttþfgyyuuihhryiihsfgy

Good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍Good GoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGood

+++++++++×××××××××××××++++++++++++++++++++++++++++××@@×××@!!!!!!!++++++++++++!!+!!!!!!!!!!+++!!!!!!!!!+++++++++++++!++!!!!!+++++++±+++++++×++××××××××××××××××××××+××××××

Great story, the content is original, and the writing quality is also great, overall the story is both new and interesting, a good read. The main character does not have any system or anything though, still overpowered.

Great story with great potential, the MC has no cheats except great talent and his own mind, so not one of those stories where the MC is a system slave, a good read.

Never in my life had I thought I would come across a decent DxD Fanfic

it's pretty boring at this point. slow pace of development, no humor, no new ideas, at five years old he is already strong. Having read all the current chapters, I have no desire to read further. perhaps after the release of new chapters the story will become more interesting, but for now it’s rotten

I like it so far especially his power but the conversations he has with other need some improvement but other than that it is good also what I was trying to say on my first review was if he was evil in his old world.

.......................,.......,.....................,.,.......,........,.,...,.,........,.....,....,..,..,..,.,.,. .,...,.,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,..,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,. .,..,.,.,.,.

i will give 4.4 stars for new fanfiction....from first chapter i read i am ready like the story but don't know your update schedule....and thanks for consider my comment at chapter 1

Only one chapter so far wasn’t any glaring grammatical errors story has alot of potential just needs to add regular updates and it’ll get a decent audience you should also get a synopsis for this story

Too much chat gpt I can’t even focus for too long because it keep boring me

เผยเนื้อหาสำคัญ