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Greater Than Gods: Chojusen Akimichi [Complete: I'm On The Job Editting~ This Is What I'm Suppose To Write, Right?]

Naruto, but Naruto isn't the MC, Its Choji's twin brother that has a system. As much as I wish for Chojusen to be a space-trotting gopnik, we probably won’t ever see that come to fruition. This is the closest I can come to photoshopping an image that resembles Chojusen. He’s supposed to have parted hair like a comb-over. But, aside from that, the image is pretty much ok. Sources for the novel cover (I Photoshopped the images together, but this is where I got them before it was edited~): http://www.kinyu-z.net/WDF-1566448.html https://www.deviantart.com/torivic/art/Gopnik-Slav-Ishida-734359751 https://i.pinimg.com/originals/f1/6c/01/f16c015d6865695689833f76f70be901.jpg http://ninrp.wikia.com/wiki/Akimichi_Clan

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Anger That Shakes The Heavens

When Chojusen teleported everyone out of his personal dimension, he had one his clones whip up some lunch for everyone, while his true body went out into the field to fix the mess he created when he showed off his strength. Fixing some forest and mountainous terrain was not an issue; restoring an entire mountain, was the only thing that somewhat drained him.

When the main body was finished, lunch was ready. After lunch, Chojusen teleported everyone back to the Occult Research Club room. They still had another couple hours to kill as the Rating Game would take place at night. Somewhere along the road of killing time, Chojusen asked where they would be having the game.

Rias explained that they would be transported to a section of the "Dimensional Gap," where the field for the game would emulate the real world. They would be having their game in a replica of Kuoh Academy. Chojusen, intrigued by this Dimensional Gap, kept asking questions, but neither Rias nor any of her peerage knew the answers to what Chojusen asked.

Eventually, the time for the game came, Rias and her team were escorted by the student council president to the teleportation seal that would take to the Dimensional Gap. Sona would be acting as the announcer, she would also make calls through the school's P.A. system and relay the match to the various high ranking devils of the Underworld.

When Chojusen came out of the other end of the teleportation seal, he noticed that it was exactly as Rias pictured it; the section of the Dimensional Gap they arrived in looked exactly like the real world, only a green aurora-like barrier marked the section available for the Rating Game.

Chojusen was interested in this dimension as it was unlike anything he had seen. Even the system's map counted the Dimensional Gap as its own separate system from the real world. The game would start at any minute, so Chojusen didn't go off exploring now. But in the future, he would study this Dimensional Gap with a keen eye.

When Sona's voice came from the P.A. system, Chojusen was brought back to reality. Sona called from the Rating Game to begin and Rias just asked Kiba, Koneko, and Akeno to go take out Riser's peerage. She wouldn't ask for Asia or Chojusen to help her, unless the situation became critical. Besides, with the improvements of the training Chojusen had them go through, the three of them could probably take out all of Riser's peerage with little to no trouble.

Before Akeno left, Chojusen told her to leave Riser to him; he still hadn't let that grudge go… Akeno didn't really care if Chojusen stole one kill, especially since she wasn't too sure if she could beat him; Riser was after all, a complete immortal because of his bloodline.

Kiba and Koneko took to the ground, while Akeno put on her priestess clothes and flew through the air. No one did anything to conceal their tracks; they were that confident in their strength.

With their obvious and arrogant display, Riser was justifiably mad, he directly sent his entire peerage to ambush Koneko and Kiba. Like Rias, all of his peerage traveled by ground while his queen took to the skies.

Riser's queen tried to wipe out both Koneko and Kiba with a large scale bomb attack, but she was intercepted by Akeno. She sent the bomb at Akeno, but it only ended up cracking a barrier Akeno conjured around herself. Riser's queen was a bit worried seeing Akeno take one of her deadliest attacks so effortlessly.

Akeno adopted her seductress tone and said "Now it's my turn~" She then created three overlapping magic circles and blasted Riser's queen to near death with lightning. She seemed a bit let down that her attack didn't immediately take Riser's queen out of the battle, and was even a bit surprised when she saw her instantly recover after taking a Phoenix tear.

As Akeno was destroying the fabled Bomb Queen, Kiba and Koneko were having a field day taking out the rest of Riser's peerage. Every punch or kick from Koneko would destroy the bodies of her opponents, and when Kiba wasn't slicing and dicing his enemies to chunks, his Sword Birth would impale his enemies from the ground.

By the time Riser's queen was fully restored, the rest of Riser's peerage — with the exception of one of his Bishops, his little sister — was gone; they had been teleported out of the Dimensional Gap and hadn't truly died. The Bomb Queen looked at Akeno for mercy, but only received a stronger lightning attack in the end.

Riser was mad beyond reasoning after he watched his entire peerage get wiped out like they were some kind of joke. He left his comfy couch and arrived at the scene of his peerage's destruction. As he was about to start a fight with Akeno, Chojusen teleported in front of him and kicked him all the way to the Game Field's barrier.

Chojusen noticed that his kick barely had any effect other than to launch his opponent away, so he became a bit more serious. He teleported once more to Riser's side and while under Density Duplication, he directly stomped off one of his legs. It was a needless show of brutality, as Riser recovered his leg after his stump created a quick burst of phoenix flames.

Riser got up and threw a punch covered in his immortals flames at Chojusen's face. Chojusen caught his hand and said "Playing with fire in front of me?" he then engulfed his hands in holy flames, prompting Riser to scream. Chojusen then covered his legs in the same holy flames and kicked Riser once again; his ragdolled body didn't stop until it collided with the opposite side of the field.

When Chojusen teleported over to Riser's side once again, the latter had already recovered from his holy flame's damage. Chojusen looked at the now panting Riser, and said "Why don't you just give up? You may be immortal, but staying in a fight with me will just lead to increasingly greater methods of torture."

Riser had never felt so humiliated in his life. Who was he? He was a god damned immortal phoenix! Where did this no-name worthless loser come from? And who did he think he was trying to boss him around. In his ever increasing hatred and wrath towards Chojusen, Riser made a fatal mistake by trying to aggravate him. He thought back to his first encounter with Chojusen and remembered that Chojusen didn't like the way he handled Rias. Consumed by his negative emotions, Riser said the worst things he could possible think of.

Riser looked at Chojusen, his face morphing into a sadistic smile. With hatred emanating from all the pores on his body he said "Give up? You're right..." he started laughing like a maniac and continued saying "Maybe I should go do that, my parents already told me this shitty Rating Game was all just a front for the Gremories to retain their face after Rias inevitably becomes my wife. There's nothing that stupid slut can do to change her shitty life, and nothing you do, will change it either! When we do get MARRIED, I will fuck that stupid slut in front of you and there will be nothing you can do to change that."

Riser was so caught up in his vulgar threats that he didn't notice the heaven-shaking pressure coming off of Chojusen's body. Riser continued "I can't wait to see your miserable face, as that shitty soon-to-be-WIFE of mine bounces on my cock while you just stand there. HAHAHAHA..." All these profanities he screamed at Chojusen were clearly heard by everyone in the game and all the high ranking devils the game was broadcasted towards. Most people knew that these were just insults Riser said as they knew that he had lost and just wanted a jab at Chojusen's pride. However, Chojusen took his threats to be serious, as he could see that right now — in his extreme state of distress — Riser really would be capable of such obscenities, with the way his emotions flared.

Chojusen finally snapped and his Fiendgod Eyes returned to their previous peak. He unintentionally released his Nephilim True Body, gaining four pairs of pure white bat wings and two dangerous blinking black halos. The pressure he emitted reached tangible levels of destruction. With a mind at the brink of collapse and a wrath that could burn True Gods, Chojusen gave out a fiendish roar and teleported to Riser's side.

He clasped his hands together and punched Riser from the top of his head, driving him several kilometers underground; the remnants of his attack created a crater that decimated half the field allotted for the Rating game.

Chojusen had not let off nearly enough steam after being triggered so badly, so after another burst of teleportation, he ruined every part of Riser body; no limb nor bone was spared and through the many revivals of Riser's bloodline, many of his bones and limbs were either broken or eviscerated to pieces multiple times before Chojusen managed to calm back down.

In his fit of rage, Chojusen neglected to use holy energy as he was too riled up to think straight. As a result, Riser hadn't been truthfully damaged as badly as he though. Riser succeeded in angering Chojusen so he kept at it. He said "Che! And when I'm done with her, the rest of her peerage will get their fair share of me and all glory. HAHAHAHA..."

Just as Chojusen was about to return to normal, this idiot just had to add insult to injury. Chojusen threw caution to the wind and went of on a magical rampage. He threw all kinds of elemental beams and attacks at Riser, only managing to get a reaction when he used holy energy. So, for a finisher he charged up a holy fire beam, after he immobilizing Riser for one final time with a flurry of melee attacks and kicked his near-disintegrated body into the earth.

Scary Chojusen shocks the world~

Last Chapter, I read a comment that gave me a really good idea. Anyways, to pull it off we need a vote: Chojusen takes Riser’s sister into his Harem/Peerage; yes or no? Also, at this point. I think it's impossible for Chojusen to be limited to three girls per universe, so as they say “carpe diem” let loose and wish for the best~

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