I'm sick but also not entirely satisfied by this story, but I'm not inclined towards rewriting it either. Instead I'm thinking of two Targ stories but one critical difference. This story is focused on the rivalry between brothers, but what if they were more aligned than disparate? So, I'm gonna explore that avenue in addition to my DxD, but that'll be an off time project more than anything. Chapter 2 for my last DxD Update is maybe half done, but I'm still rather sick so we'll ultimately have to wait and see what actually happens