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Glitched Heart

นักเขียน: Hellifrit
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Xing Tian, an amnesiac 20-year-old backpacker arrives in the city of Faunus as her final traveling spot. On the first day in the city, she encounters a battlefield of soldiers and inhumane creatures called Glitches and becomes involved in the war between humans and monsters. With the device known as [Antivirus equipment] she obtains, can she end the war between human and Glitches? *Volume I finished.* *Hiatus until end of burn out*

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

The narration was exceptional. The perks of being a native speaker. Although not all native speakers are well verse in grammar so I appreciate the author's supremacy among others. The story was interesting for me so this novel will surely garner attention in the near future. I am not much of a critique and I say this is outstanding for me. Kudos!

Fritziest
FritziestLv1Fritziest

Amazing. This book makes a lot of points. Great character qualities and a very good plotted story. I liked how every paragraph is worded just enough. I enjoyed it.

TofSpades
TofSpadesLv3TofSpades

How could I not give this story five stars?! this is incredibly written. I felt like I was really there, becoming entranced in the story. if you're looking for a novel written like a professional, then this is it people! just read the first chapter and you'll be hooked! Keep it up author.

Yvette_Celia
Yvette_CeliaLv10Yvette_Celia

I like this story so much! I enjoy reading it and yeah, i really like it. The author have done a good job in writing this story. So, its a 5 star from me

mathepid
mathepidLv11mathepid

While there is world building at the start, the introduction of Xing Tian as the ‘Asian girl’ is a bit disconnected in the first two chapters. It is systematically written and there is a lot of hard work done on the novel. The novel probably belongs to the cyberpunk genre . Just a personal opinion on my part, it is a nuance but each new character generation tend to be a little choppy at the start. This choppiness isn’t a grammatical issue but rather how the content flows. Fight/combat scenes while described, requires more action, shorter description to give it an ‘action’ feel. However it is my personal preference. Others may prefer in depth descriptions. Overall, nice work!

ElaryWakefield
ElaryWakefieldLv11ElaryWakefield

I love the whole idea of this story and the world-building. I can't wait for more! I love the use of they in the first chapter. I also feel the 2020 simulation feels a bit like last year. It was all so strange. Like nothing was real.

Proteety_Promi
Proteety_PromiLv3Proteety_Promi

The name is quite catchy and you get the main concept of the story from the synopsis as well. So far I read, the story has potential and if you keep working on it, I think it will be an amazing piece of work!

kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3kuhaku_sora

The concept is fantastic! Although I have only read few chapters of your book, I was drawn inside that world! The only few points that I'd like to point out is the usage of tenses (since you started with past tense, I think you should use past participle words.) and filter words. Besides that, I think this novel is going to be fantastic!

mrant12
mrant12Lv2mrant12

Interesting plot and theme! A refreshing take on the story and the narration is lively and so are the expressions! Looking forward to read some more future updates to come.

kpthe1
kpthe1Lv12kpthe1

First of all the wrting quality of this book is excellent. It is clear making the story more engaging. The plot is smooth and story is very unqiue. I can say this is a perfect Sci-fi book. With the stable updates this will become great!!

Talal77
Talal77Lv3Talal77

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KiaoSuvan
KiaoSuvanLv1KiaoSuvan

This is a ver good read though i find some wording to be strange i think the Premise have great potential with a lot of mistery and action. this story is very solid and is worth a read for sure.

Erfan_Sh
Erfan_ShLv1Erfan_Sh

The plot was interesting and great. great characters development. This web novel is amazing. keep up the hard work, author........................

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