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2021-06-15 11:14

The concept is fantastic! Although I have only read few chapters of your book, I was drawn inside that world! The only few points that I'd like to point out is the usage of tenses (since you started with past tense, I think you should use past participle words.) and filter words. Besides that, I think this novel is going to be fantastic!

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