Fate series: My Alternate Saber

Check out the review at the bottom, for some reason I can't pin it.

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Nice i like it so far but there is not much chapters to make a solid review so all i can say is that it is a good fan fiction so far anyway i can't wait to see more of this fic by

If I had to sum this book up in one sentence it would be "A teenager discovers Fate/Grand Order and thinks the servants are hot." A lot of Fate laws are broken within the first 3 chapters and characters are all ooc or just new ocs. Scathach isn't even summonable outside of f/go since she's still alive btw...

Honestly has potential but for lack of a better word was Made too Quickly without much or any research to Fate just considering The Stats which weren't the Normal E-A rankings but rather just "Maxed"

So far, it's looking good! Writing quality is decent. Updates are stable, for now, at least. Story development, so far is going well. As for character design, I think we need more of the MC's thought process. As for Saber, well, it's good, I suppose. Overall, it's a good read.

Added to library, all I can say is amazing, amzing lot, amazing plot, amazing world outline. The author has great potential, the book is so smooth no errors, and easily readable and a bit addictive trust me I read and read to the latest chapter, you just want to know whats next. Definately worth your time.

Meh.....................................

its pretty fast paced but other than that I'd say it's pretty darn good whether it's the characters or the world settings so for me it is enjoyable

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do i need to know have knowledge of fate to read this?? Cuz I aint doing that ( It's the reason I have stayed away from fate fics for so long )

Well for me I saw it to be Harem. Nothing special but interesting.

I read the first chapters it is pretty good my only problem is that I fn't really like harem, but yeah if you like harem you will probably like it. Good luck writing the rest author.

Esto no tiene nada que ver con fate, parece más Pokémon con sirvientes que fate porfavor corrija "fate" . Esto no es fate[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]