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Evolving Ghost System: Phantom Universe Expansion Pack

Author: RazorIsSharp
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Harvard had been a well respected lawyer, but then he got killed by his girlfriend because he forgot to take out the garbage and she also had robbed a bank. Afterwards, he had a lot of time to think in the underworld before he got to meet King Yama - a beautiful women with the greatest mounds and body he'd ever seen on the ruler of the underworld. She invited him to take part in the phantom universe expansion pack, and because of his lot in life, she decided to give him a little bit of much needed help. He gets lucky enough to inherit the Evolving Ghost System, and journey into the new expanded universe! Inside, he will meet lots of beautiful women, complete quests from badass NPCS, and have fun joining a guild and terrorizing the new universe. There is nothing he cannot do with his new system! [Evolving Ghost System would like to give you a gift basket!] [All Host has to do is complete a simple Quest to receive it!]] 'Oh god, I hope it's more simple than killing 100,000 Ghost Slimes. My reputation is still ruined because of that!" Harvard nervously opened the prompt. "Oh no! Oh god! Here we go again!" *** Any votes are appreciated and will birth new chapters! Please add to the library as well if you wouldn't mind, and come back and expect daily updates if this story gets enough votes! Thank you for your largesse!

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Real Score: 2/5 (Fix your scoring Webnovel) "I think I would prefer actual oblivion to this afterlife.) First I'd like to say that this story does seem to have some cool concepts. Setting the story in the actual afterlife is probably the most unique concept for a Isekai story that seem so obvious in retrospect. Like how have we not done this sooner. Anyway, they also flip the OP Power/Gift on its head but having the MC sell it for cash "Because it can't be too hard to level up right?" Not realizing that most people can't get past level 10 or 15. And the gift would have put him around level 30. That was actually funny, and a good way to have your cake and eat it too. And even if the afterlife shtick is only aesthetic it's cool to see. And its character driven, so points there. But that's about it. Now for negativity. Honestly, this is just Another, "get stronger to happy ending cultivation story." Just with an RPG level system, (which is overplayed by this point) and a Spooooky esthetic. The MC doesn't even meet historical figures, or dead friends and family. COME ON! It was right there. It's just so hard to love something when it trades everything that could be considered unique or interesting for generic fluff. It's hard to stay invested. And Yes I'm told that it "Gets Good" because all cultivation story's "Get Good." But you people know that that isn't a point in its favor, Right? Stick your leg in some acid and after a couple hours, yes you won't be in pain, yes. But taking the next step in your personal journey will be a bit difficult, won't it?! How about we try this! Why don't we write stories that are good all the way through rather than only 1% well written while swimming in a sea of 99% blandness.

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