When I read harvard, I thought it's that famous school. When I found out it's a name, I was like, okay that's cool. I find your story funny to read, although I'm sure it's not a comedy. I'm entertained by your plot and story set up, especially the character. When it said "sort of float around" I crack up. Anyway, your story is a good material and I wish you luck in your writing journey. Keep up the good work author!

A very interesting read turning the afterlife into a game. I loved the creative approach of the author in how they explained the afterlife and the process of waiting to meet the king of the underworld. One thing that threw me off was that the king of the underworld was a female although constantly being referred to as King which is normally a term saved for males. Other than that the writing was great the pacing amazing throughout. The way the character grows in the game and outpaces many other players out of sheer determination was interesting to see and reminds me of some people I know in real life who are the same way when gaming. All in all. Great work author! It was a fun read and it is exciting to see where the story will go next.

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would've been good if the mc didn't have to be a goofball ideas great but feel more like a comedy show I guess,..............................

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so far (1-30) this seem to be a unique book, it takes a different approach to the usually system like novels! in my review the book/auther seems to do the opposite of what is expected. for example king yama being female or the system having a personality only when the character dodo something oblivious. there is a little of unorthodox humor in between, which nice for a change. all in all; this book has potential to be great in a unique. if your looking for a run thru consistedly level up and badass main character this book isn't for you but if your looking for comedy/slice of life look no further.

Read up to 38 so far. I like it so far as a whole, but something about the writing style bothers me. I either don't know what the problem is or can't put it in words. Will keep reading.

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This book is Very Creative, I have read a lot of Video gamebooks but I find this one a little more interesting. Turing the Afterlife into a game is Unique in itself. The book is well written and has a few unexcepted surprises. What I am most excited about is upcoming enemies Keep Up the Good Work Wild-Bunni