webnovel

dropped, continued by the name Journey towards greatness.

อื่น ๆ
Ongoing · 1.2M Views
  • 51 Chs
    Content
  • 4.7
    30 ratings
  • N/A
    SUPPORT
Synopsis

If you want to read this novel, search for- Journey Towards Greatness I have reupload this novel because of some problems.

Chapter 1A New Beginning

My name is Julian an Ex war veteran, today I turn 82 and I can feel death coming for me but I have no regrets even though my life was once a hell participating in war all the killing I had done always haunted me, it had turned me into a rock with no feelings but life didn't give up on me I found a woman I started to love, I married her and had kids after the war ended I retired from a bullet wound in my spine, my son soon grew up into a perfect man found a beautiful wife for himself and had a son, that day was the happiest day of my life when I carried my grandson, as years passed my grandson grew and we spent a lot of time together he would force me to watch different animes with him and soon I grew used to it in fact, I started liking it we both loved pokemon and we used to always argue which is the better pokemon. I laugh at myself thinking how funny that an old man arguing with his grandson about anime but I didn't feel ashamed because I started to live my childhood which I never had, I always thought that God didn't exist when I was young but after experiencing life and everything that it has given me I believe even if God didn't show himself to us but he is still watching over us all a guiding us.

"Sigh, being alone in the hospital is pretty boring and this fucking pain in the spine is killing me"

'I wonder when will my grandson come, he said he will visit me after school is over, it's going to be another long day I guess I will sleep'

As I close my eyes I was suddenly surrounded by darkness and I was slowly losing my consciousness I suddenly started cursing in my head 'fucking death can't even let me meet my family one last time'

After I die I feel nothing but its still weird that I can still think I start to freak out then suddenly everything turns white and in front of me there is a middle age man smiling, I took a minute to calm my self down.

"May I know who are you?"

"Some call me God, Some call me the creator but it is up to you to decide who I am to you"

After listening to him I was shocked to the core, I suddenly went to my knees in front of him

"Thank you, Lord, for granting me a good life"

"Rise, I don't need your thank you I am happy that you don't blame me for giving you a cruel start, there are very few souls like you"

"I wouldn't dare accuse you of anything"

"I am quite happy today so I will grant you a second life with three wishes to go with it"

I was really excited to hear what he said even though I am an old man getting a chance to live again is very tempting, I started to think what wish I should make and I finally decided

"Lord my first wish is to be reincarnated into the universe of the pokemon in Kanto region"

"My second wish is to have my memories of my past life with me"

"My third wish is to have an AI-based system"

Hearing my wishes God smiles and say

"You are very intelligent for wishing your memories to be intact, many people forget such a crucial aspect and have been reincarnated without there memory"

"Now I will ask you how do you want to be reincarnated? do you want to start as a baby or do you want me to create a body for you and send you there? if you choose the second option you can choose any one starter pokemon you want for the start of your journey"

Of course, I choose the second option as any reasonable person will choose it

"So you choose the second option, good"

suddenly a screen appears in front of me, I look at the screen and realize I can make my body the way I want it to be, seeing this I become happy and start shaping my body, I choose a slender muscular body with a little tan skin but not too much, I set my age at 16, height 6 feet, red eyes, black hair and made my little brother 9 inches 'hehe' after that there was a section of starter pokemon I browse through it and select Chimchar because I really liked it final evolution and its blaze ability after I finish designing everything I look at god, then suddenly i remembered something

"Lord, how does the timeline work in the pokemon universe?"

"Ah I almost forgot to inform you as the planet which you are going to reincarnate is 100 times bigger than your previous planet so 1 year in your new world will be 10 years in your previous world and the elements in your new world is so rich that people tend to live a very long life and grow slowly, that's why you don't see ash become old"

After listening to him I calculate that if my previous world had the same concept I could live up to 800 years at average

"Lord I am ready"

"Good, may you enjoy your new life to the fullest"

He said and waved his hand, suddenly a portal opened under me and sucked me in before I knew I became unconscious and drifted away.

You May Also Like

In Hentai World as Mira Tsubakihara's Relative

After Hikari transmigrated, he quickly realized that this 2D world was just a little different from what he'd imagined. There were no Shuchiin Academy, no Service Club, no Yukino or Eriri... Instead, he found himself in a dangerous and downright baffling world. Currently, Hikari was staying at Miss Mira’s place. And as if things couldn’t get weirder, Mira’s best friend was Mrs. Kasumi. In the apartment next door lived a silver-haired beauty who looked exactly like a Yuki-onna, and there were sunflowers and hydrangeas... whatever that meant. His class rep was called Chizuru, his homeroom teacher was named Miwa Shirakawa, and there were three gyarus in his class who, for some reason, wanted to throw a party at his house every day. Then there was Sakurajima Miyajima, the head of the Kendo Club, Nanao Akane, the Baseball Club’s manager, and two sisters from the Archery Club who went by the last name Sakuramiya. Oh, and the neighboring school? That was the prestigious Sekai Girls’ Academy. To top it off, he had some relatives in the countryside named Kaiseiri and Sayoko, and his neighbor was a NEET who called himself a "self-defense force." This world was seriously messed up. Danger lurked everywhere, and if you weren't careful, you'd get dragged into something weird, or worse. "This world might be full of filth and corruption, but I'll smash it with a single punch." --The Pure Love Battle God, Nakamura Hikari. ═❀═❀═Its A Translation═❀═❀═ Raw: 在成人世界里作为椿原美拉的亲属 Author: 小鲨鱼

AmbitiousTransltor · อื่น ๆ
4.4
237 Chs
Table of Contents
Volume 1

ratings

  • Overall Rate
  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background
Reviews
Liked
Newest
PayDay
PayDayLv14

TL;DR Expectations: Old hardened war vet with a soft side for kids. Who enjoys his new life as a Pokemon trainer and moves forward past having to leave his wife and family behind. Reality: Teen with delusions of being a war vet was hit by a truck and God played along with his delusions and let him go to the Pokemon world where he finally gets to use the 9 in dick he never had on Earth on the equally delusional females. Grammar needs work some misspellings. The story rather than showing us what's happening tells you. The dialogue could use some work... Some of the conversations don't seem at all realistic. Updates are fine I suppose the Author hasn't gotten to an amount where I can fairly judge it. I can't say the story has really developed at all. It feels more about the ladies in the anime than the Pokemon. Which brings us to Character Design... this is supposed to be an 80 something year old man who gets sent to the Pokemon world. Yet he acts like the 16 year old he made his body into. I don't see any wisdom at all so far even though apparently he has a good amount. You told us he has some fighting ability but the one instance I read of him using it you didn't do a good job of showing it off. Rather than an aged war veteran I'd say we have at most a high schooler with a need to flirt and have ***. World background is Pokemon it hasn't been described much in any sort of way so I'm guessing we just go off what the Anime looks like. So far I'm not impressed with the story or the MC. Fine he's 80 something and probably hasn't done it in a while, but right now it's just an old man who goes to a Pokemon world to have *** with the young beautiful females. If I had to give some advice I'd say fix the dialogue it's not great. The battles need something because right now they seem almost dull. Rather than keeping his memories it feels like he only kept the memories of Pokemon, "fighting" and ***. It doesn't even feel like he had a wife once. Even though this wife was apparently the one who turned him from a hardened rock into whatever he is today. We don't even find out if she was alive or not. I honestly feel like there was no point in making him an old man or a war veteran. Making him a typical **** or geek man who got hit by a truck would give us the same exact MC.

vermakumar
vermakumarLv6
Hitorribochi
HitorribochiLv3
Hitorribochi
HitorribochiLv3

SUPPORT

empty img

coming soon