Evil_God_Zarakh

adamantium can cut vibranium so I don't think suped up muscles and bones stand a chance, no matter how strong they are.

The mc is immensely annoying and the story hasn't even started.

The mc feels more like a side character with all those lengthy copy paste dialogues from the show. Also I may be the only one but it feel weird reading about two 11 year old flirting.

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Battle beast is one of the most powerful character in invincible, he is almost equal to the big bad of the series, Thragg

bro, Alex is even younger, what are you talking about?😂

Because he is an all powerful immortal vampire, his status is even higher than an emperor.

That's not the MC, this is the divine emperor. MC's junior.

With how you wrote it, it felt like canon as it is connected to the story before it all even began. Just make it canon since it's from Becky's perspective and it also explains how Becky and Hulk ended up there. I think this chapter should come right after chapter 2.

Actually, the human host can live forever if they are hosting the spirit of vengeance, they will only die if the spirit is passed down to another.