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DISHONEST

This is my story. I grew up in a village of slaves in the kingdom of Erlösung. My mother, a prostitute in a brothel, was my only family, and I loved her dearly. My only friend was the chief's granddaughter. Despite not having much, I treasured our time together and the memories we made. Everything changed when a soldier discovered my mother's true identity as an elf and a witch. In order to protect me, she sacrificed herself, and I found myself in a precarious situation between life and death in the Cave of Between. After being attacked by the guardian, an ancient dragon of chaos, my soul was spirited away to the underworld. My journey has been to escape the seven hells and to grow stronger for my quest of seeking revenge for my loved ones. My name is Alonne Snowseek, and this is my story.

jFrazierSan · แฟนตาซี
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I tempted to Redo chapter 4 (Aurthor's Notes) Please read!

I'm concerned that Chapter 4 might confuse some readers. In this chapter, Alonne is attempting to learn translation magic to communicate with Haukan. I'm worried that I might be providing too much information at this point in the story, which is something I'd like to avoid.

As mentioned, I want the beginning of the story to progress slowly in order to thoroughly explain Alonne's life and struggles. However, due to Webnovels' policies, I have to update at least once a week, which I think is absolute bullshit. As a result, I am displeased with having to write this rushed chapter.

So, if chapter 4 is different in the future, that is why. And also need to create a lore Maogoi's in the future, in a better power system for them. I want them to be something similar to fate's power system. 

And I also don't want Alonne to be a powerhouse right away; I envision him as more of a jack of all trades, but primarily, he would be a swordsman.

Who knows, I might write a power system guide to provide a better understanding of the various types of power systems. This will help readers like yourself avoid confusion.