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DD: Heavens P

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Lin Fan had been reborn into Douluo Dalu with a cheat called the Library of Heavens Path. But he realized, that his Library of Heavens Path was very limited! And what he first got was the Heavens Path Divine Art, nothing more and nothing less. ... English is not my first language, and I used the Translator App to convert it from Indonesian to English. So, maybe a lot of sentences that look weird. Of course, I'll try to edit it as best I can. You can support me via: paypal.me/ghermansparrow13

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Apocalypse Btch System

Synopsis: On the wedding night the bride that is sitting on the bed in the bridal chamber waiting for her husband. “I have returned 16 years back in time. There is still 1 year before the apocalypse starts.” “Now I can have my revenge on that bastard husband of mine. That bastard has used me to sleep with his superiors climb up his job ranks, He used me to sleep with strong survivors gain supplies in the apocalypse. He stole my opportunities to get those rare treasures of the apocalypse. Finally when he became powerful he looked at other bitches and abandons me to die in the ditch like a used tissue paper. Hahaha…. Now I will have my revenge. Not only on you, but every single person that used me for their benefits would pay the heavy price.” Extreme heat, extreme cold, floods, tsunamis, mutated beasts and plants, zombies, meteorites…. “Ding Congratulations host for obtaining the Apocalypse Bitch System. Bitch, You can see your status panel that should appear after you reach the apocalypse land. You will get quests and choices from the system that would give you rewards and may be penalties some times. There is a system store that is currently locked before the start of the apocalypse. There will be special mission that can let you enter what you call it as literary works like Naruto, one piece, dragon ball… to gain special benefits. Your starter’s gift pack quest, Cuckold your husband on the day of the wedding…” That little ring that I got from my ancestor seems to have space or something. My bastard husband took it from me and gave it to some bitch for his fun. This time I will not let you have it. I am going to hoard all the supplies and live the life of a bitch that fucked the apocalypse….

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global_flatline
global_flatlineLv3global_flatline

Nice fanfic, but you should change the cover to attract more attention. .........,.........................................................

andika_liauwan
andika_liauwanLv3andika_liauwan

I have read a lot of douluo fanfic on the china web because this is still new so I said give the big harem to mc hahahahahaha ...........................

Lv11

It is a wonderful novel and I really enjoyed it I hope you continue to update the novel, and I am really looking forward to the new chapters. best of luck, my man.

Gherman_Sparrow13
Gherman_Sparrow13นักเขียนGherman_Sparrow13

You want a review from me? This FanFiction tells of Lin Fan who reincarnated into Douluo Dalu, with a cheat called Library of Heavens Path. However, his Library of Heavens Path was limited. It's not like any Library you've ever read, which has to collect and put all the books together first. But this library has provided all the perfect techniques from the start, it's just that they are limited in number. Yes, limited. So Lin Fan wouldn't get all the techniques from the start, but one by one when he reached Rank 10, 20, 30, and so on. Of course, the Library of Heavens Path's basic abilities were still there, as it was used to check all target information. Lin Fan's Martial Spirit was very simple, not a Beast, not a Weapon, not related to God, and not from another Animation. Yes, very simple, one of them is the Spirit Body. Is there romance? Of course there is, but you have to be patient. But don't expect Harem, because I don't really like stories that contain Harem. Well, even though I'm going to decide to make a Harem, I'm only making Lin Fan have 2 Heroines. Is the story good? I don't know, I just made up what was on my mind. At least, I tried to make everything that Lin Fan did to have a plausible reason. Then, is the MC Simp? You could say yes, and you could also say no. Maybe you will complain on the part: "Why didn't the MC save his mother from the start?" "Why doesn't the MC read all the books in the Heaven Dou Empire library?" "Why didn't the MC just train in Heaven Dou Empire?" "How can the MC give a little of his strength just because of Karma?" "Why was the MC careless and entered the Spirit Beast Forest with low cultivation?" Well, maybe you can read it first. If the explanations in each chapter weren't very satisfactory, I also have nothing more to say. And there may be many other complaints, such as: 1. Spirit Bones should only come from 1,000 year old Spirit Beasts. 2. The Red Spirit Ring must have two abilities. 3. The ability of a Spirit Beast is not like that. 4. Etc. Eh? What do you expect from FanFic? You want to compare a FanFict with the Original?

nether_2001
nether_2001Lv14nether_2001

raw link please 🥺🥺........................................................................................................................

Darius_Chromwell
Darius_ChromwellLv4Darius_Chromwell

I liked the earlier chapters of the novel(if a bit rough around the edges) but later on around chapter 45-50 it feels like it has become nothing but a comedy and that gets old really fast, so I'm going to drop it here.

3PoundsOfRice
3PoundsOfRiceLv53PoundsOfRice

Brother, have you considered publishing this story elsewhere? It can be questionable questing or fanfiction.net. Many will leave here, including me, and your story is one of the few things I don't want to leave xD, but I have no choice because I can't read properly due to the lack of a proper translator in the app.

3PoundsOfRice
3PoundsOfRiceLv53PoundsOfRice

A word of advice, that martial soul "spirit soul" in your previous version, does not seem logical to me. All martial souls are an extension of the soul. I recommend a neural type martial soul. There is already a character with a martial soul brain, but it only has a silver rating. I recommend a martial soul that encompasses the entire nervous system. Unless you're going to create an ultimate martial soul that powers every last molecule of his body. But I think it's better to have two powerful martial armalas, since you can absorb more rings. Then you can make each one evolve or even give them a spiritual fusion.

Darkiling
DarkilingLv1Darkiling

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Thiarha
ThiarhaLv4Thiarha

เผยเนื้อหาสำคัญ

Ivanicjpg
IvanicjpgLv15Ivanicjpg

honestly, I wish I had found this FF later than I did so I can binge more great beginning, and really looking forward to where this story will head

TheWinterMoonlight
TheWinterMoonlightLv3TheWinterMoonlight

I'm really enjoying it. Please write more. Thank you for the novel! ..........................................................................................

FadeKnight
FadeKnightLv2FadeKnight

This is good stuff. Here is a five star review in the hopes that you continue.

Daos_Nine_Heavens
Daos_Nine_HeavensLv2Daos_Nine_Heavens

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Kostya_Dolgushev
Kostya_DolgushevLv12Kostya_Dolgushev

I liked the novel, looking forward to new chapters.[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

LifelessMan
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akafip
akafipLv1akafip

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Ibrahim_NiR
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EaCalibur
EaCaliburLv5EaCalibur

The premise is good but it has too much info dump and too little character interaction. But at least it is not filled with cliches, so i hope you can improve....

DaoistTP0fHy
DaoistTP0fHyLv4DaoistTP0fHy

This one of the best novel I have ever read I can only say that it needs a bit of harem or romance and it will be perfect and of course more chabter for us loyal readers to enjoy it and thank you for your hard work

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