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Cultivator in an MMORPG

นักเขียน: CelestialDemon
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What is Cultivator in an MMORPG

อ่านนิยาย Cultivator in an MMORPG โดย ผู้เขียน CelestialDemon ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.A 19-Year-Old prodigy named Wu Tian spent his first 19 years of life in a stuck up Ancient Martial Arts Clan and decided to run away. Why did he run away from home you ask? Well, its to play video gam...

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A 19-Year-Old prodigy named Wu Tian spent his first 19 years of life in a stuck up Ancient Martial Arts Clan and decided to run away. Why did he run away from home you ask? Well, its to play video games, watch as he becomes the most powerful gamer in the MMORPG, Heavens Reach.

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Everlasting Chains

In a time of slavery, conflict and conquest, lies the path of Basha, a young man born in a sea of bondage and tragedy where the right to belong is robbed of him and his brother Hasan owing to them being sold into slavery. Escape from this jagged reality appears in the unlikeliest of forms; the battlefield. The campaign sparked by the redheaded giant Frode threatens the safety and way of life of all the people on the Yellow Continent, sending the brothers on separate journeys. Basha, bound by the idea of servitude finds himself unable to comprehend a freedom of his own, seeking for a place in a world that continues to reject him. A strange people however, welcome him but in the capacity of the Kingmaker to usher the young King Darius of Ainshold into the era of the Kingdom of Glass. Whether the scrolls foretelling these events are true remains a mystery, to all but one, a figure from the two brothers' past. The paths of these siblings converge once more as unforeseen circumstances draw them closer and closer to the truth of the King's crest, for he who bears it brings war and with it, the heads of all the false kings. When the truths surrounding these scrolls become more apparent, powerful adversaries convene in order to either take the Kingmaker for themselves or eliminate the threat before it reaches for their throats. The bonds of the brothers are tested, evolving and waxing stronger still, pulling at the unseen strings of human nature, posing questions... yet to be answered.

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South Sudanese Civil War

The South Sudanese Civil War was a multi-sided civil war in South Sudan between forces of the government and opposition forces. In December 2013, President Kiir accused his former deputy Riek Machar and ten others of attempting a coup d'état. Machar denied trying to start a coup and fled to lead the SPLM – in opposition (SPLM-IO). Fighting broke out between the Sudan People's Liberation Movement (SPLM) and SPLM-IO, igniting the civil war. Ugandan troops were deployed to fight alongside the South Sudanese government. The United Nations has peacekeepers in the country as part of the United Nations Mission in South Sudan (UNMISS). Quick Facts Date, Location ... In January 2014, the first ceasefire agreement was reached. Fighting continued and would be followed by several more ceasefire agreements. Negotiations were mediated by "IGAD +" (which includes the eight regional nations called the Intergovernmental Authority on Development as well as the African Union, United Nations, China, the EU, USA, UK and Norway). A peace agreement known as the "Compromise Peace Agreement" was signed in August 2015. Machar returned to Juba in 2016 and was appointed vice president. Following a second breakout of fighting within Juba, the SPLM-IO fled to the surrounding and previously peaceful Equatoria region. Kiir replaced Machar as First Vice President with Taban Deng Gai, splitting the opposition, and rebel in-fighting became a major part of the conflict. A rivalry between the President and Paul Malong Awan, former army chief, also led to fighting.In August 2018, another power sharing agreement came into effect. On 22 February 2020, rivals Kiir and Machar struck a unity deal and formed a coalition government. About 400,000 people were estimated to have been killed in the war by April 2018, including notable atrocities such as the 2014 Bentiu massacre. Although both men had supporters from across South Sudan's ethnic divides, subsequent fighting had ethnic undertones. Kiir's Dinka ethnic group has been accused of attacking other ethnic groups and Machar's Nuer ethnic group has been accused of attacking the Dinka. More than 4 million people have been displaced, with about 1.8 million of those internally displaced, and about 2.5 million having fled to neighboring countries, especially Uganda and Sudan. Fighting in the agricultural heartland in the south of the country caused the number of people facing starvation to soar to 6 million, causing famine in 2017 in some areas. The country's economy has also been devastated. According to the IMF in October 2017, real income had halved since 2013 and inflation was more than 300% per annum.

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GGMissFortune
GGMissFortuneLv6GGMissFortune

Terrible writing, kill yourself level math. 100.000-85.000=25.000? would not it be 15,000? Back to grade school sonny. This is not how to spend ur free time.

LordChew
LordChewLv5LordChew

Everyone this is just my personal views on this novel. This novel is awesome and has a lot of potential to be with the top 50.If you like mmorpg martial gamer then i bet you will like this novel because of the similarities like clans in modern world and a runaway from his clan. So its quite similar also i think it has the game mechanics like 100% completion rate stuff like that so I guess it is inspired by that novel. Author pls dont spam his Attributes its annoying also pls do this to your attributes 50 --- 68 so we wont get confused of what changed. I hope that you will post a stable update for us and Good Luck writing this novel.

Saarlink
SaarlinkLv5Saarlink

The story has a decent premise but is totally destroyed by unbelievable details. Author please slow down. Take your time. There is no need to rush. The numbers used are impossible to believe. For example, the idea that only one person would spawn in a particular village out of 6 in the most popular game of its time is...hard to swallow? The MC completes one relatively easy quest (done in under 30 seconds) to gain...about 5+ game changing and completely different rewards. The entire world map is explored (except locked zones) by day 2 making this game incredibly small. I could go on but I think you get the point. There might be a real gem of a novel here as the basic premise is good. However, I'll never know as all of the details are just so jarringly wrong that I am unable to keep reading this. Author please consider finding an editor to help pick up on details like I mentioned as well as the frequent issues with grammar, especially punctuation.

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. 😎😎

ur_stupidity
ur_stupidityLv6ur_stupidity

Okay. So firstly. I tried. I really tried to stick with this novel. And give it leeway cus gaming novels are hard with stats and balancing RL and VR. But seriously author. Wtf. Are you even rereading your work? Making notes of past chapters? Planning and outlining? Listening to the reviews? It’s an amazing concept and the first chapter was excellent. But then it’s just downhill at a ridiculous pace. I would suggest rewriting it from the beginning. But take time and plan. And observe how other novels are done. You need to plan not just the MC development in game and outside. But also the game world. Story line. Skills. And stats. And most importantly. You need to stick to your own details. Also it seems the stats are messing you up terribly so just ignore them and use descriptive and vague words. Allow for auto assignment and development of stats. Plz avoid over done % effects that can stack and fixed damages that will be be no sense when ppl level up their HP. Sure 500 damage is cool at first. But the time the MC is able to use the move his HP is already over 2000 and he isn’t even a tank. Much less later. Also the progression of the stats leveling up is inconsistent and just random. You are doing too much too soon. Overdoing everything. Rewards. Leveling. Masteries. Churning out legendary equipment within the first year of the game when it’s the the second to highest level of equipment with 5 levels under it??? That breaks the game especially since he can’t use the weapons due to his class and rich ppl suddenly own the game. You need to develop your story. Not just **** it out fast. Take time to fight and learn and grow your character and their world. He is just blazing through time, fights and stats. And it’s boring, inconsistent and useless. He isn’t even OP cus he has so little conflict to show OP ability and has very little impact on the world according to the novel. So here it is. Final words. Remember that the best stories have cliffhangers due to conflict and real world relations and developments. As well as in game world development and changes. Not everything has to be directly and immediately related to the MC and you don’t have to force time and character progression. Character and world development is more important. A whole chapter on the effects of a players actions can still be epic. Also include more humor and action. The story is too dry. More meat. Even if it means slower chapters and slower time progression. Also you need to decide what type of MC you are going for. A struggling MC with character development. Or an oblivious OP MC with insane luck and skill. Each one will have its own conflict storylines. OP ones mean more comedy and face slapping and will allow for broken dumb luck and unbelievable situations. Although you have to temper it to their character. Sly. Hotheaded. Etc. struggling MC will require more feelings and backstory and inner thoughts. Connections and deep bonds. And finally. You need to have goals. An MC without goals/standards is useless. Even if it’s just to have fun. What is their goal both personally and for the game. And this will affect their choices. Writing a story isn’t ****** and shouldn’t just be done blindly. Put thought into it and passion. And reread your work. Compare to others of similar genre. Definitely google some writing tips.

hunterking
hunterkingLv4hunterking

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BelikrDragon
BelikrDragonLv5BelikrDragon

love the story so far keep up the good work don't lest people get you down XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

the_Nerd_of_Asians
the_Nerd_of_AsiansLv5the_Nerd_of_Asians

I can't believe there are so many bad reviews that you guys made this rated as (3.1). My real rating would be a 4.5 but I will make a 5.0 to try to balance the rating. The story is very cool and I can't wait to see what happens next. The story went a little too fast for a story and could use some filler but overall I love it!

maax
maaxLv5maax

Yo buddy good luck for this novel hope you reach many milestones for this. But just do me a favor don't write his status details in every chapter i think it's just a waste of time and waste of words. You can just show which skill has leveled up like Body Refining level up to 9 like that.....or some thing else figure it out. You can use bold letters or some other format. If u think it's necessary to show the status page just write it in comment section once you finish the chapter. I just hope that u can write the status page at every 5 chapters with the details of each skills. So we read more about the story not just the skills. I hope you will consider this.

Kuran0666
Kuran0666Lv6Kuran0666

The story is good but the Asura is to overpowered. If his opponents were just asking strong then it'd be better. Don't take this wrong, it's a good novel and keep up the work. 😘💓💕

Im_too_stupid
Im_too_stupidLv1Im_too_stupid

I loved it and hope to see more in the future! math is a bit wonky but if you look past it its a wonderful story that you could take a chill afternoon to read

James_Fasooto
James_FasootoLv13James_Fasooto

great

Ants_n_MMORPGs
Ants_n_MMORPGsLv2Ants_n_MMORPGs

gdlhsotzglarjsglaoyfyoaotslyYldltdpiskdluskdlgLhflufluslydlydpydoydlyxpyxlydlydpuxhldludludluufpufpudh THIS NOVEL IS UNDERRATED and I'm just giving free stars

ShaNnia
ShaNniaLv1ShaNnia

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VVex
VVexLv3VVex

I can honestly say that this has to be, if not my favorite mmorpg based story that I've read. Overall, the main character is great, not many grammar mistakes, and is just a great story I've truly enjoyed. I finished what's been added so far, and I'm looking forward to future chapters. Keep up the great work!

Dart
DartLv5Dart

Started out a copy then rough but ultimately a gem........ can’t wait To keep reading moaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar!

Ryujii
RyujiiLv15Ryujii

Its a Good story but need more depth in the story and for each character and the world in itself and u could make some fillers with Side Quests im no writer so i can only give some small advice 👍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩👌🤩

zander_light
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kmpret
kmpretLv4kmpret

so, no more updates??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Wangdong
WangdongLv6Wangdong

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