Ants_n_MMORPGs
I am 15 yrs old and I'm creating a book and I think it is decent but I'll see since I'm not really a writer but don't hate and I hope you understand
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Ants_n_MMORPGsa year agoตอบกลับถึง Ashen_Blazesrry I got school and I kinda lost my drive
- Ants_n_MMORPGs2 years agoตอบกลับถึง Azriclu
thank you for the motivation
- Ants_n_MMORPGs2 years agoแปะแล้ว
It's a good story but it could use some work on it's Grammar and more detail on the world background
- Ants_n_MMORPGs2 years agoตอบกลับถึง CaptainBoyHole
yeah that's a good idea
- Ants_n_MMORPGs2 years agoตอบกลับถึง Ants_n_MMORPGs
and it was also kinda inaccurate even though it's supposed to be fiction so I added some of the realistic stuff about ants
- Ants_n_MMORPGs2 years agoตอบกลับถึง Azriclu
yeah I rewrote alot of it because I felt like he got op too quickly so I wanna go a little slower this time
- Ants_n_MMORPGs2 years agoเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I love this novel
- Ants_n_MMORPGs2 years agoแปะแล้ว
I really like this but I think the writing is kinda confusing, like put the story in each individual paragraph, put spaces in between each other, other than that I like it
- Ants_n_MMORPGs2 years agoตอบกลับถึง Azriclu
I can't guarantee it lol, I just started highschool this year
- Ants_n_MMORPGs2 years agoตอบกลับถึง Azriclu
I dunno about that because I got school
