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Comatose: Star Wars Fan Fiction

A small story in the Wolves of the Force timeline during the third year of the Clone Wars. Jedi Padawans Axle Tinguard and Ahsoka Tano crash land after nearly escaping an exploding Separatist flagship. When their escape pod smashes into the surface of an unknown foggy planet, both Padawans suffer serious injuries. On top of their dangerous situations, Axle and Ahsoka also face a new deep connection putting the Jedi code at risk. Now with no way to contact help and their wounds growing even more, Axle and Ahsoka must survive the dangerous planet.

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The Father Reaction

Anakin's POV

They had sex. I could not believe it. I saw them kiss all over each other and rip the clothes from their bodies. All the sweat and love making filled my mind. I couldn't get it out. I wanted to scream. THAT'S MY PADAWAN!!! AXLE IS DOING IT WITH MY PADAWAN!!!

I stormed out of my quarters where Rex was waiting, "Sir, is everything alright?" My face was burning from my hatred, "THAT LITTLE BRAT NOT ONLY KISSED MY PADAWAN, BUT MADE LOVE WITH HER TOO!!!" Rex was surprised by my outburst, "Sir, you need to calm down. Remember when you told me about you and Padme. Now is Ahsoka in pain?" I hesitated, "N..no." "And did she feel lonely and afraid?" He asked again. I shook my head, "No." Rex smiled, "Then what did she feel?" "Happy." I sighed and looked down, "She was happy." "Ahsoka loves Axle. They weren't playing around." The Captain answered. "She wasn't just happy." I started, "She was fully in sync with Axle. It wasn't much of hormones that pulled them....but it was a need to be together. A way of freedom from all the rules and to live her life her way." Rex gave another smile, "And how does that make you feel?" I sighed again, "I'm happy. Ahsoka fell in love with an amazing person just like I did with Padme. Rex, we can't tell anyone about them." "Are you sure?" Rex asked, "They still violated a strict rule. A rule that all Jedi live by." I raised an eyebrow at him. "Ok, most Jedi live by." He said, rolling his eyes, "Listen, if we're going to not tell anyone, then let's not tell them we know. That way it would be easier for them to get comfortable." I hesitated, but nodded, "Ok, as long as they don't kiss or make love while I'm around I won't say anything." Rex laughed and put his helmet on, "Also, why are you watching them have sex? Isn't that supposed to be personal? No offence General, but that kinda makes you a pervert." He turned around and walked in the other direction. I grunted, "Hey!"

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Ahsoka's POV

It was so hot, yet the night was so cold. Axle and I both laid naked on our clothes. He was fast asleep. His arms were still wrapped around me and his warm breath flowed down my body. We were covered in sweat. I kissed his lips slowly. I never felt so much love. I was so tired from all the work we just did. Although Axle did more of the work considering he was on top. We just broke the most strictly enforced rule in the Jedi order. If Master Skywalker finds out, he'll kill me. I hate how he always treats me like a helpless little girl. I'm 16. I can handle myself most of the time. I can make my own decisions. I chose to forget about Lux, but I chose to have the most amazing and heartfelt night with Axle. I love him. I want to make even more sweat with him.

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Rex's POV

I walked into the barracks and sat down to grab my holo-pictures. I opened the one where Axle and Ahsoka had their arms around their shoulders. This was when they first turned 16. Their first steps into adulthood. Now they went from best friends to hardcore love partners. I'm happy for them. Ever since I was born, I was trained to be a soldier. The same for those two. They've been trained at a very young age to battle Sith Lords and trash clankas. They were lucky to find love in their world of war. Barley any clone has ever found love before. Cut Lawquane was another lucky bastard who found his way to love and away from war. When we find Axle and Ahsoka, I'm going to give them as much space as possible because I bet they want to make proper love on the bed. We're coming Commanders.