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Allies's Vishnu

Vishnu is old detective who is former member of Indian Army and RAW.Who suddenly went missing after making his First Indian Private Crime investigating Company. He comeback after 4 years to solve a murder case.He was solving case from shadows and do not accepting to solve Case which was Solving by police or any other government Department.But Indra request him to solve his last case in front of public.

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The true past

Second arc ep1

Name of story-Allies's Vishnu

In year 2000 when your father was part of Indian army,He and his team was assigned an special and secret mission.The code name of mission was 'M90 Feed'.

They had given the task to rescue India's top scientist from a terrorist group known as Deep Kashmir.And the member of group had to destroy terrorist group.

The night before mission

General:Commandos that mission is very important that's why you all are choosen.Your first objective to rescue our top Scientist and Second objective is to destroy Deep Kashmir.Your mission will start on 6:00 am in morning.Now you all can leave!

In morning at 6:00 am

General:You all have to clear mission.Mission is your first priority.

All commandos:Yes sir![Replied with high amount of Aura]

General:Die for India,Live for India.

All commandos:[Saluting and with high aura]Jai hind

All commandos ran with their weapons and entered helicopters.

They are going to invade POK,they all are in tension and all are feeling power flowing inside them.11 commandos are choosen for this mission from appearance they all are looking powerful.Some of them were are in their own world,some are seeing their family photo and remembering

Their mission was to rescue scientist without any harm,after rescuing them they have cross LOC by land route even POK is part of India according to Indian government and Pakistan government POK is part of Pakistan.At 4 km near suchetgarh border BSF soilder will came to help them.That was short summary of mission.

The helicopters cross big forest beneath followed by long rivers and then crossing shivalik range of Himalayas.They reached POK at 6:30 am.

The pilots takes helicopters down around 100 metres up from ground and instructed them to jump from helicopter attach with rope.

'Sigh'

First..Second....third... eleven they all came down fastly from control room general and many computer man are helping them.

Their commander was Elyan sharma.The experienced and oldest man from team.General named this team Hind Azad.

They are using a radio Jockey as communication method,because at that time airpods were not invented.To connect radio Jockey to control room they have a large antina coming out from there back around 12 cm up from their bags reaching their head or crossing it.

They all are wearing buttel proof jacket with custom guns only for them like their fighting style.This is first time when,a first time group are given custom gun.

Vishnu's custom was looking like Sword which is cutting shortgun.The most complex thing was handle of sword.(For rough sketch see comment section).

Elyan sharma: Everyone. from here we will get separated in 4/5/2 format like in training.2 will go to save scientist they will be covered by another 4 and remaining 5 will handle first line.

He means that 5 of them will be in front of 2 and remaining 4 will cover them.After they reach main entrance of room,2 which are in middle line will go in room and 4 which are in front will cover and remaining 5 will check another rooms.After they rescue scientist 2 from 4 person will get separate to clear the mess with help of remaining 5.They all will rejoin at checkpoint which is LOC.Vishnu was selected in front because of shortrange fighting style.

Elyan sharma:Let's start commandos

He roared and remaining replied him as same Aura.

Everyone:Yaaaaa

They formed lines and ran towards door.

Commando1:Sir!Get are locked from inside and we cannot blow it.They will get aware.

Elyan sharma:Blow it!

Commando 1 nodded and give signal to Next commando.He take out a grenade from his back's left pocket and slided it near the gate.

Commando 2(Next commando):Get back

Everyone get back 10 step and crouched.

'Boom'The gate blowed away.They all entered in open field.They already guessed it by gate size.But the surprising thing was that the building was a school.It was under control in terrorist.

Even General didn't know that.To inform them Elyan sharma take out Radio Jockey from his left pocket of pant.He adjusted channels and changed position with another commando.He was first part of front line but now he was in middle line.

Elyan sharma:(on Jockey)Hello hello 123, It's sharma 08 commandor of Hind Azad.

General:(from Jockey)Yes Elyan!

Elyan sharma:(on Jockey)Sir! It's inform that the building which they are occupied is a school.So,we cannot harm this place.

General:(From Jockey)Ok noted

Here from Jockey means the voice is coming back from Jockey.

They had destroyed the gate but from this moment they have to be extra careful because if they had captured this school by forcefully then around this school that means people will be living nearby and some will be in school as Victim of terrorist.

Hearing boom voice they all got alerted and some of terrorist saw them.

Terrorist 1:There janab!

Terrorist 2: Indian army! Don't let them enter.

He commanded they were standing in school corridor.There was no one near the gate or in ground.The school was only one floor.

'drrrr drrr'They shooted by their AK47 but non one of them hitted Commandos.

They fastly take covered behind some busses.They were behind busses teir.So their let don't reveal.

'drrrr drrrr'They were shooting blindly not targeting them without any hesitation.

Vishnu:(Sign to captain Elyan)

He signed him to tell him that back line have to take care of them.So,They can go in front.

Elyan:(Sign to another commando from back line)

Another commando:(sign in yes)

Elyan:(Sign to front line)

All from front line nodded.

Preview

Hmmmm hmmm,I am Aanand I am hearing My father story from my Uncle.You all are with us.

Vishnu swing his sword killing someone.Middle line entered in room were terrorist were helded.

Unknown:You are in trouble Indian army

He smiled

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