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A THIRD DELGADO

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อ่านนิยาย A THIRD DELGADO โดย ผู้เขียน redely ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.A young adult goes to sleep one day, he did not expect that the next time he opened his eyes he would do so as a baby, even less he expected it to be like the son of a female character from a series t...

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A young adult goes to sleep one day, he did not expect that the next time he opened his eyes he would do so as a baby, even less he expected it to be like the son of a female character from a series that he only saw in passing. This is a translation of my fanfic in Spanish, it is not my first language, so I will appreciate the corrections.

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Griselda.

I quiver as he snakes his arm around my waist with his lips behind my ear whispering, "So what would you say about my proposal, Zelda?" Peering into his eyes with a smile on my lips, I entangle him in a hug and plunge the knife at his back taking him by surprise. Slowly, he goes limp in my arms falling on his knees before me while staring at me and not uttering a word. Leaning forward, I give him a peck as a tear escapes from my eyes. "I'm sorry, either way it's meant to come to this." I say giving a him final look before twisting the knife further at his back, leaving him to bleed to death. ***** Griselda Capell, a seemingly average young lady with hidden abilities has only one ambition in life, 'to become successful and find a fairytale type of love'. Her dreams come crashing down when she's sold off to the Royal pure blooded Garcia's family as a mistress to the heir, Aidan. Slowly, she entertains the idea that life with Aidan doesn't seem all bad as they rather fall in love. Soon, her hidden abilities are slowly discovered and harnessed, with emissaries of the Venine temple whisking her away and intimating of her role and destiny in life. Plots, twists and turns ensue as her destiny which she's expected to fulfill is in stark contrast with Aidan's, which harshly drifts them apart and turns her into a version of herself she had never dreamt of, a monster as some may call her. With a mass of powers at the tip of her fingers, tons of army at her command, Griselda turns out to be Aidan's most dreaded enemy, fear and weakness. A entrancing tale of love and hate, lovers to enemies, both expected to do away with each other, which will survive?

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The Omnipotent Being

An unknown past, an unknown background, only a few things can be recalled, one of them being his name. "Takeru" Suffering from amnesia, he couldn't recall anything past the day he was saved from the catastrophe that befell their nation. Aside from his name, he knew he possesses two things: A power to create power, and a power to steal. Little did he know, these abilities were more than just an almighty gift from fate. Being able to "steal" was a dominant power, but in return brought many consequences. A few of those problems were tackled, but a lot more had yet to be uncovered and understood by him. In the Supernatural Era of Earth, where magic was bestowed upon humanity to rival the darkness that seeks to wipe them out, they fought bravely against that darkness. But with unimaginable power, their very own greed got the best of them as humanity had sought out to conquer one another. Maybe, in the midst of all these chaotic events, whether it was done by humans or by the monsters of the Void, Takeru can finally find his true self and what purpose he serves for being brought into this fate-torn world. ********** Author's Note: But yeah, basically a power fantasy novel, very generic I know I know. But yeah. Anyways, I intend to finish this story once and for all. Before Webnovel, I have been writing this for ages but have never gotten to fully finish it nor dedicate a lot of time into it, this time I'm gonna do it... hopefully... Hopefully this will be the last time and if you feel like wasting time, you are very much welcome here lol. The door's open not just for you but for everyone so feel free! Ehem, this is me, pre-upload of TOB, Volumes 1-3 will be uploaded in one go with 1 and 2 being free, I will update and upload chapters whenever I can. I don't plan to follow a schedule like uploading two chapters every week or so, so don't bother wasting power stones or whatever currencies Webnovel uses, still not familiar with all these stuff... And feel free to give out your thoughts on my story, I take all forms of criticism, just don't be an A-hole. That's all! Peace~

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I don't know if it's just me, but I found it hard to follow. Too many crossovers and not clear with timeskips, I've been reading each chapter as a mini story arc with timeskips missing a chunk of interaction between characters. I do believe this fic has a good start, but wavers as more and more characters are introduced as each chapter passes. The main character for me is a bit much, I think he has too much going on as he changes rapidly, not sure if it reads better in Spanish. Wish you all the best with this story!

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