A Killer Can't Change

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Heyyo author here again, Noticed that I STILL make a ton of mistakes like forgetting a word, missing a word, butchering spellings and even writing sentences that make no sense. I downloaded Grammarly to my phone like 2 days ago so that helped reduce the amount of mistakes I made, but Grammarly has a hard time detecting when a word is either missing or when a dialogue symbol is missing or when a sentence makes no sense. I will be going back to revise my previous chapters to try and fix them when I have time, but sadly I got little free time AND even if I did, I would still miss some of these mistakes So here's the IMPORTANT bit, please comment any typo you find, any sentences that feel off/like you don't get it, any spelling mistakes, any Name mistakes. I try to keep my novels clean from those simple mistakes, but there's only so much my eyes can notice. Sorry again for dishing out chapter after chapter all filled with mistakes. I am not gonna tell you to expect me to change instantly, I'mm 100% sure there will be mistakes in the next chapter and probably the next still. It's my first time writing so hopefully over time I learn how to avoid typing as much mistakes and learn how to notice errors when I revise more. accurately.

=====SOME WORDS FROM THE AUTHOR===== Heyyo! Author here making a review since all this would be too much for the synopsis. Just want to let you all know that this is my 2nd attempt at TRYING to turn writing into a hobby. So I'm pretty sure you all have seen this kind of synopsis before so I'm just gonna be direct: -I have 0 writing experience AND 0 social communication skills so expect some bad attempts at jokes, romance or just normal conversations. I grew up being good at neither of those IRL ;-; . Please point out when something just sounds too forced or too cringey. -This novel is inspired by The webnovel: Villain Retirement by Romeru. It's an awesome novel if you're into some extreme gore and violence with some comedy in it then go check it out. -PLEASE point out any typos or grammar errors because whenever I find one, I can actually just forget about it instantly. And if you see some dialouge and think it could be written better, then please share your suggestion in the comments because in my head I think you readers got better english than I do despite me growing up speaking english the majority of my life. -Unlike Villain Retirement, the MC will not talk like a robot but instead be an actual normal kid that doesn't try and kill any living person he sees straight away. Only similarities is that he has something rough going on in their heads that screws their thinking and sense morality, for John this happens slowly as the story progresses and no I am not talking about Riley being in the spectrum but something else. -Schedule of release? I'll try and force myself to write 1 chapter a day just to develop the habit but the time of when I upload is random at the moment since I got some school stuff to deal with if I want to graduate. For now all I can say is that I will be uploading around in the afternoons or evenings of where I live. When I have more free time then i might have a better upload schedule. Abd yeah that's about all I can think of. Please take some time to read read and hopefully enjoy!