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The new life.

In a battlefield, hundreds of million of corpse were lying everywhere. And in the middle of the hills of corpses, there stood a magnificent creature kneeling to ground with guilty conscious. And in front of him stood another creature so big like he could swallow the whole universe, imitating a lots of energy just like the Supreme God.

Supreme god,"You know what you have done wrong little one."

"No", said by the little creature feeling no guilty conscious.

Hearing this the god smiled and said, "when a person gains somepower overnight, then he ought to be arrogant, and be drunk in his powers. Why not you gain some experience of the mortal worlds may be after that you may understand the rule of life and death."

From now on you will no longer have any power in your hand, I in the name of Supreme god shall deprive you of your power and status of immortal world,

you will be reduced to the mere mortal and will be experience life as a mortal like a normal person and will be trapped between life and death reincarnating again and again, so you may be able to learn the value of life and something in the mortal world. And of course you shall always carry your memories for every life until your punishment ends.

it's my first time writing the story, and not so much experienced so please tell me if you feel any difficulties in grammer or story development.

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