Was enjoying this but so far i rate this a 2/5 because an OP character with his Powers wnats to use gadgets and other weapons.... like i understand if you “lost” your powers but thats literally only because of Krptonite so this is a 2/5 so far
You have real talent the way you structure the story your insight as to how to modify the situation to fit the story is a breath of fresh air please continue do great things
This story is a bit too scattered to be anything great. Too much of the story gets lost in the details of things that don't matter, and too little is spent on topics the MC truly cares about. A lot of the begining of the story felt like a series of brief journal entries trying to get to a topic Kal cared enough about to interact with in detail, and when scenes finally started getting some substance Kal was usually just stealing lines from better characters. This story was almost good.
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oh my god, how can there be such a monstrosity, he is supposed to be a transmigrant and an adult scientist in that and he behaves like a teenager, how terrible, besides, between chapters there are meaningless jumps.
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the third chapter and it already fell so disappointing....................................................................................................
Yes finally something new more More
How many fabrics are you going to do chill out man finish one first ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
wherever could screw up, screw up ...........................................................................................................
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I honestly really like this. Update speed is a little slow, but the progression of the story itself is ridiculous. As in, some adventures the MC goes on isnt written. Regardless of the strange way the story is told, its still a very enjoyable read.
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great story I'm likening this take on superman and batman, keep up the good job..............................................................
I'm really enjoying the story so far, I'm glad your back to writing this fan fic it's one of my favorite along with your Atla fan fic. keep up the great work. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Sorry! Just a shameless writer reviewing his own story. 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅 Though I wish to thank everyone that have read it. 😉👍 For those who didn’t like it... sorry, I really hope you find what you are looking for. Suggestions and doubts are always welcomed. Bye!
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good fanfic but mc is too OP and you read it more as a saga not story. Could use a little improvement on action. thanks
