The Invincible Hero

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*This review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: There are a few mistakes (punctuation and capitalization) that need corrected. Also, I wish we saw a bit more of his wife (mabey in later chaps?) Positive Notes: I really liked the character and story buildup. Also, the way you did the whole reincarnation tech, just amazing. Thank you for the great story. Personal Preference: I h8 that I needed to limit myself to five chapters for now, too many books to go through to read any more. Will definitely come back to this one later, be expecting my return and please keep writing until completion.;,;. (If you don't, you will have many upset fans.;,;.)

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