Item: The Invincible Hero
Rating: 5
Author: DeJeL

DeJeLLv156yr

2018-06-06 06:18

*This review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: There are a few mistakes (punctuation and capitalization) that need corrected. Also, I wish we saw a bit more of his wife (mabey in later chaps?) Positive Notes: I really liked the character and story buildup. Also, the way you did the whole reincarnation tech, just amazing. Thank you for the great story. Personal Preference: I h8 that I needed to limit myself to five chapters for now, too many books to go through to read any more. Will definitely come back to this one later, be expecting my return and please keep writing until completion.;,;. (If you don't, you will have many upset fans.;,;.)

The Invincible Hero

VynDahl

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VynDahlAuthor

Thanks, I'm working on editing the early chapters. I more or less write the chapter and do a quick edit and put it up. This is to put the books out. I have someone helping me with editing now. Right now everything is in a rough draft form. I hope you continue to come back and read the series! I think I'm taking it in an interesting direction. Concerning whether he and his wife ever get back together again, who knows!

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