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'The One Punch Girl' In Nine Deadly Realms

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What is 'The One Punch Girl' In Nine Deadly Realms

อ่านนิยาย 'The One Punch Girl' In Nine Deadly Realms โดย ผู้เขียน squirtle_sqaud_z ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.' The One Punch Girl' is the strongest Female super Hero ever in Female Lead. Often She finishes her opponents in one punch. She is immortal But doesn't Know that . The Earth's Immortal system has se...

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' The One Punch Girl' is the strongest Female super Hero ever in Female Lead. Often She finishes her opponents in one punch. She is immortal But doesn't Know that . The Earth's Immortal system has sent her to earth for sake of defending the World by many aliens . Despite being a busy division leader, there she will be pretend to be a student ,will be Giving tests , capturing monsters , deals with human relationships and resolving conflicts between different species. Find Out how she deals with it , from the first chapter.

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BODY SOLD ( ABO-OMEGAVERSE )

Aru, Polly and HiVi are three Omega's in three different situation, Aru and Polly grow up together like real blood brother's while HiVi and Aru are twins separated right after birth and never given the chance to know each others existence. Aru was forcefully taken to pay for his biological fathers debt and left Polly uncared by his own mother, who was married to an old politician, exploiting him to the old man's will and six bodyguards who gives him a slight freedom in exchange for his body. Then HiVi meet Aru and became close friends inside the club, being part of the elite prostitute and the highest paid personality for their intoxicating beauty and tantalising body. On Aru's last day of paying his father's debt, HiVi cried bidding his goodbye to him, and followed their car secretly, their HiVi found, his mate which made him lost his way home and got him trap in the club was their own boss, but he was not seen as a mate, but was used to close multiple businesses deals, suffering and almost died in his mates hands, if not for his unborn childs spirit, always saving him. Then Aru and Polly meet again, but Aru was sold by Polly in exchange for a new identity, escaping his miserable life, inspite what Polly did to him, he can't get angry at him for he understands how it feels, and instead wish him a good life. Polly then became an Omega of Recessive type from being a Beta all his life, after a one night stand with a Dominant Alpha, during his first heat, he was turned into ice, and sold to an auction, to become a pet, to some millionaire. Then Aru made a negotiation to his new boss where Polly sold him, just to gain his freedom back and fast, but while doing his best to finished the task given to him, to have his freedom again. He found out his target was his DESTINED MATE, the once in a lifetime Extreme Alpha. And his life became a total mess, because it turned out, his new boss where Polly sold him, has something to do with the death of his mother and manipulation of his ruined life and the one who killed his daughter. Then he lost his memory, and met a girl who looks like him, calling him mom, and the exact resemblance of his triplets.

houchi50 · แฟนตาซี
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Yacinta Reina, gadis 24 tahun tinggal bersama Bibi dan Pamannya, ia harus membalas Budi pada Bibinya yang selama ini sudah baik padanya, ketika sang Bibi sedang sakit parah, di saat itu pula, Cinta harus rela mengorbankan masa depannya. Ia harus menikah degan pria kaya yang tentunya mau membayar semua pengobatan sang Bibi yang tak sedikit. Tidak sampai di situ, Leo sebagai suami yang sudah menikahi Cinta, Tidak memperlakukan Cinta layaknya seperti istri, ia malah menjual Cinta pada teman bisnisnya, karena di janjikan akan di berikan saham yang cukup mahal. Cinta harus kembali menelan kenyataan pahit. Tidak mau penderitaan ini berkelanjutan, Cinta memilih pergi dan kabur dari sebuah apartemen mewah itu. Sementara Leo, ia sudah pergi dari hidup cinta, setelah mendapatkan apa yang ia mau. Sakti hati? tentu saja itu yang di rasakan oleh Cinta, ia memiliki dendam yang luar biasa di dalam sanubarinya, dan bertekad akan membalaskan sakit hatinya pada Leo, tapi, sakit hati itu, seketika memudar saat ia bisa terlepas dari lelaki hidung belang yang hanya ingin menikmati tubuhnya. Suatu ketika, Cinta bertemu lagi dengan Erland, mantan pacarnya yang pernah menjalin hubungan dengannya di masalalu. Ketika itu, hati Erland di tumbuhi dengan rasa cinta yang dulu pernah ia rasakan pada Cinta. Ia mengungkapkan isi hatinya pada Cinta, dan berjanji akan membalaskan sakit hati yang di rasakan oleh Cinta pada Leo, dengan syarat Cinta harus mau menjadi kekasihnya kembali. Suatu hari, Cinta di pertemukan Kembali dengan Leo, Leo yang di tuntut oleh teman bisnisnya, karena kepergian Cinta tanpa izin, tentu saja geram pada kelakuan Cinta, ia menghukum Cinta dengan seberat mungkin. Membawa Cinta ke sebuah rumah besar miliknya, dan menjadikan Cinta sebagai pelayan untuk Ronde, Buaya jantan berukuran besar yang menjadi kesayangan Leo, buaya itu begitu garang dan tak boleh salah saat di beri makan, ia akan mengamuk jika saja pawangnya telat memberi makan, itu adalah salah satu tantangan untuk Cinta. Cinta juga di jadikan pelayan untuknya dan keluarganya yang lain. Awalnya, Leo meminta uang yang sudah ia berikan pada Cinta untuk pengobatan sang Bibi, tapi karena uang yang sudah habis, membuat Cinta Tidak bisa mengembalikan uang itu. Dan terpaksa harus menuruti keinginan Leo. Cinta melewati hari-hari yang di penuhi dengan drama, Hari terus berlalu, kecantikan dan kebaikan Cinta seolah menghipnotis Leo, hingga jatuh hati padanya. merasa tersaingi, Moa sebagai wanita yang menyukai Leo, tentunya ingin membuat Cinta kembali pergi. Moa membawa Cinta pergi ke suatu tempat setelah ia memberikan obat tidur pada Cinta. Tidak terima dengan apa yang di lakukan oleh Moa, membuat Leo menjadi marah, ia memerintah anak buahnya untuk mencari Moa, dan mempenjarakan Moa menanggung jawabkan apa yang sudah di lakukannya. Tapi Moa berhasil kabur untuk sementara waktu dan meninggalkan Leo bersama dengan Cinta, Leo memberikan perhatian-perhatian kecil pada Cinta tanpa ia sadari. Dan Cinta, Sementara Erland, ia mencoba membunuh Leo dengan cara mendorongnya dari atas balkon, namun berhasil di gagalkan oleh Cinta. Ternyata bukan hanya Erland yang menginginkan malapetaka itu, melainkan Moa saudara tiri dari Cinta yang kini telah kembali untuk mengharapkan celakanya Cinta, ia juga memberikan sebuah minuman beracun untuk Cinta, tapi sayang, Erland yang tidak tahu apapun, malah meminum minuman itu, hingga menyebabkan ia meninggal sedangkan Moa, ia terpaksa harus mendekam di balik jeruji besi. Leo dan Cinta, akhirnya bahagia dengan pernikahannya yang tulus, Cinta juga melupakan semua kejahatan Leo di masalalu. Leo selalu menyayangi Cinta, ia juga selalu belajar dari masalalunya dulu, tak lupa, kata maaf selalu ia katakan pada Cinta. di Bukan ketiga mereka menikah, Cinta di berikan titipan yang tak terduga oleh sang maha kuasa , akhirnya Mereka bahagia dengan seorang putra yang di lahirkan oleh Cinta.

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Cindersen
CindersenLv4Cindersen

Whoa. How did this get so many votes when the story is inspired by One Punch Man and this isn't a fan fiction inspired contest? Not to mention, it has poor writing with frequent lack of proper capitalization, punctuation, and overall correct sentence structure. The mistakes are so blatantly obvious that it makes me wonder if the reviewers who gave this such high ratings are in elementary school or something. My advice would be to use Grammarly or learn how to write better basic English because this grammar is pretty bad and detracts from any semblance of a story. I would have given you a one, but you tried, so two for effort. I hope you take my advice seriously in order to improve your story and writing.

Lazy_Prince
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Legio9
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AuroraAzure
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Umm.. I'm only here because the author commented to me on IRAS randomly to check out their novel. It was out of the blue since it was off of a balloon gift comment of mine, but I was curious and checked it out anyway. But the writing is just okay for me? I'm not into anime and I can't follow the story well because I think the formatting got messed up? Oh well you told me to check it out so I did. Good luck with your story I suppose? 😅 Sorry I can't give more feedback because I can't follow the story that well, and it's only 4 chapters long...... Guerilla advertising on translated novels is probably not a good idea haha. I was surprised by the reply. 😆

julis
julisLv3julis

Sorry but I expected better from a story voted third in the contest. Writing mistakes are all over the place. It doesn't even look like it's being seriously written because sentences are cut off before the end and appear on another paragraph. Grammar is completely off. That just shows lack of care for properly typing and reviewing your work before uploading. There are other stories which at least proofread their work better than this. The story is also based off one punch man, so it's not really original like the other stories too. This is just my honest opinion. If I were to give you a real score on what this story deserves, it would be a 1-2 star max, no offense. Keep writing and studying proper English to get better. But I have a feeling that once this contest is over, you're just going to drop this story like many others who just join the contest for the SS prize. But I hope you do continue so that you can get better.

RedNight
RedNightLv4RedNight

I am giving you four to encourage you, and this rating in no way reflects on the story itself. If you want me to give you a honest rating, it would be one, and this one rating is due to your desire to write. Write more, learn more, from a fellow author who started at the bottom just like you.

Kalindi_Dalvi_8389
Kalindi_Dalvi_8389Lv2Kalindi_Dalvi_8389

Amazing writting quality almost no spelling mistakes Stability of updating is also good enough for 5 stars And story development is better than first chapter and The mc's development was very nice. And world background was awesome👏✊👍👏✊👍 pretty awesome book.

squirtle_sqaud_z
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The one punch girl series is best and her immense power is very important and also she is female lead so The one punch girl series is best and her immense power is very important and also she is female lead so

kkiyumno
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I saw the author comment on many novels to check out his novel, so I did. The grammar made the novel so hard to read that I could barely understand anything. Also, the idea of combining multiple different animes and stories doesn’t sit well with me. The contest is not fan fiction. Many supporters say that the grammar mistakes are a unique ‘style’, but I think they’re just mistakes. I would suggest proofreading your chapters more, checking grammar, and ensuring that it’s easier to understand what’s happening and more detail.

Kalindi_Dalvi
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Kavita_Tawde
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Amazing and best story written by him must read must read !! Amazing and best story written by him must read must read !! Amazing and best story written by him must read must read !! Amazing and best story written by him must read must read !!

Waman_Dalvi
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terminerfers_TM
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You should try my novel one punch girl you will love it You should try my novel one punch girl you will love it You should try my novel one punch girl you will love it

Zeno_Sama_Hindi
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Vijay_Tawde
Vijay_TawdeLv2Vijay_Tawde

!!!! I am speechless !!!!Amazing it's super super super amazing I like one punch girl series very much and world background also good nothing more to say but I will contribute to make it win the contest

vaman_dalvi
vaman_dalviLv2vaman_dalvi

Really awesome must try very nice that's all dabura is my favorite Really awesome must try very nice that's all dabura is my favorite Really awesome must try very nice that's all dabura is my favorite

MarcoDao
MarcoDaoLv14MarcoDao

It's not bad of a story, the author has a lot of chapters written which is very commendable I believe. The major issue I have though is that there's not much in the way of decent sentence construction or punctuation making the reading experience very messy. I'm sure English is not the author's first language so I'd recommend him to get someone to help him edit before publishing. Other than that: your premise is good, but it relies too much on me knowing comic books and Anime references of which I only know about half of those things. I'd suggest that you make an original character/villain or two and maybe explain how all the universes appeared in this earth (unless I missed a chapter or two then don't worry about this). Otherwise yeah

Bittu_Dada
Bittu_DadaLv2Bittu_Dada

Amazingly awesome its dope bro most savage book ever read its very nice all since the prolouge to all the chaps ahead must have 5 stars and also support of power stone you should also give him piwer stone trust me its worth it......

Kshitij_Tawde
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Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read

Rutuja_Tawde
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Awesome must read and update Speed very much high must take rest Awesome must read and update Speed very much highmust take rest Awesome must read and update Speed very much highmust take rest

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