Review Detail of kkiyumno in 'The One Punch Girl' In Nine Deadly Realms
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I saw the author comment on many novels to check out his novel, so I did. The grammar made the novel so hard to read that I could barely understand anything. Also, the idea of combining multiple different animes and stories doesn’t sit well with me. The contest is not fan fiction. Many supporters say that the grammar mistakes are a unique ‘style’, but I think they’re just mistakes. I would suggest proofreading your chapters more, checking grammar, and ensuring that it’s easier to understand what’s happening and more detail.
'The One Punch Girl' In Nine Deadly Realms
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Yes, the last two chapters were much better than the beginning chapters. There is still a few mistakes though, and the writing style is not my favorite.
squirtle_sqaud_z: the latest two new chaps were better than before I think
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kkiyumno:Yes, the last two chapters were much better than the beginning chapters. There is still a few mistakes though, and the writing style is not my favorite.
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kkiyumno:Yes, the last two chapters were much better than the beginning chapters. There is still a few mistakes though, and the writing style is not my favorite.
squirtle_sqaud_zนักเขียนsquirtle_sqaud_z
kkiyumno:Yes, the last two chapters were much better than the beginning chapters. There is still a few mistakes though, and the writing style is not my favorite.
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kkiyumno:Yes, the last two chapters were much better than the beginning chapters. There is still a few mistakes though, and the writing style is not my favorite.
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