[Dropped for now] - Rise of the Yokai Lord

Shameless Author Review. This is just a project I had in mind for a while and wanted to have fun writing it, while training my English with it. The grammar and syntax might be bad, yet my aim is to get better.

Truly I am enjoying this story. The writing quality is good. Character design is superb and world background very good too. I have not seen any grammatical errors. It seems you took your Time editing your work. Well done author dear.

It is different from what I am used to I must say💕❤️ However, I would like to suggest you correct your synopsis where he has one goal but you mention two things, and could you find something more realistic that could cause someone young to die of heart attack? I like fiction written in a realistic sense, this is just my opinion tho, other people would definitely like it better than I do. Your grammar is also very good, could only spot a few mistakes, keep doing good author ❤️

Japanese mythology and youkai are very interesting, I want to see what happens next.

It's still early in the story, but I'm already in love. Two chapters in and the world-building have been shown at a nice, easy to follow, flow. The first chapter did a good job of capturing Oda the human and the pressures he was dealing with. It will be interesting to see how Oda the yokai develops. Love the Japanese myths in the story, I'm always a sucker for myths. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to read what comes next in his journey.

A nice twist on the transmigration genre. There are only two chapters so there's not much I can say just judging from those two, but I decided to leave a review anyway simply because of how much I want to read more. Definitely going to keep waiting for more chapters on this one. c; Keep it up, author.

Awesome story. Seems emotional from the beginning when I heard about heart attack in the synopsis. Will definitely add in library and love to get more chapters.

This is the first time I read this kind of novel. So I didn't have much expectation. But you know what I enjoyed it a lot. Even though the story just started I liked it and I think it has potential. But the MC's action after transmigration felt kinda unreal to me. Generally people become confused and can't make decisions in unexpected situation. But MC's action felt like he is adapting to any kind of situation and accepted everything too soon. Like he is the son of Bear Grylls. xD Well jokes aside this is just my thoughts tho. The best thing about this novel was the writing.(At least to me) Ngl Authors writing quality is really good. The writing style made me enjoy the story more. I would have been more grateful if author has given description about the yokais which I had to search in google(Like the Oni, Bakeneko, orochimaru etc.) as I said this is my first read of this kinda genre I don't have any knowledge about it. And I think there will be more who will not have any idea about what these are. I also think author can improve in character appearance description. Well I guess the review became too long. (￣∇￣) But these are my thoughts. I would definitely suggest people to at least give it a try. I just copy pasted my own review that I made with my alt acc because I liked the work. Welp No offense.

This review is of the first three chapters. The quality of the work is excellent. Though there are a few tense inconsistencies here and there, I can say for certain that the author is a seasoned one. The storyline itself is also intriguing. I won't spoil too much here. For now, I look forward to more updates to come :)