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Rebirth as a Tiger: Sister is the Reborn Empress!

After transmigrating, Jiang Che discovered that he had become a little Northeast Tiger in a zoo, together with a brother and sister. Jiang Che discovered that he could hear the inner thoughts of his brother and sister. His brother is actually the reincarnation of an Ancient Demon Monarch and the younger sister is the reincarnation of a future human Empress. Fortunately, Jiang Che activated the binding feedback system, where the strength of those bound to him strengthens him tenfold in return.

Nightblade (Darkest night)

For centuries, the Thanes have ruled the shadows — a bloodline of supernatural assassins whose name inspires both fear and awe. Wealth, power, and secrecy have kept them untouchable… until a ghost from their darkest past returns and the hunters become the hunted. Emily has spent her life in a world starved of warmth, never knowing why the supernatural seems to stalk her steps. When fate throws her into the path of Morgan Thane, her own dangerous, long-suppressed powers awaken. Now hunted by forces she doesn’t understand, Emily must navigate a deadly alliance with a born killer— and survive a treacherous game where the truth could destroy them both. For event announcements and interaction with other people who love the book, check out. Discord: https://discord.gg/5DMjy5xr. Enjoy, feedback, comments, and constructive criticism are welcome.

FEEDBACK: The College System

What if success whispered in your ear, solved your problems... and rewrote reality behind your back? Rachel never asked to be chosen. One morning she woke up with gaps in her memory, a strange interface whispering through her thoughts, and classmates acting like yesterday never happened. But when the system began guiding her—subtly at first—life got easier. Her answers were faster. Her instincts sharper. People listened. And others began to fall into line. Grades soared. Doors opened. Friends changed. But so did reality. Her roommate vanishes. Faculty begin to disappear—or forget. A debate turns into a performance. And through it all, Rachel alone remembers the pieces that shouldn’t fit. The system promises progress. Perfection. Control. But beneath it's code is something hungry. Something watching . And Rachel may be the last one who can see it coming. Now Rachel must decide: stay compliant and powerful, or rebel and be erased. Power is seductive. But compliance has a price—and the invoice always arrives.

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reincarnated as deku with feedback

Akira ido is reincarnated as deku with feedbacks powers this is my first fanfiction so give feedback please

My Clinic In Another World

A surgeon whose worked his life away dies at the hands of spoiled brats. Miraculously, he gets another life but in another world starting again from zero. In this life waking up as Han, an orphan he didn't know what to do until he met Sophie. With his system he knew he could finally make his dream come true in this world by opening a Clinic. Soon his skills would be noticed but what is the true purpose or reason he was kicked to the other world, Arcancia. Would Han a powerless surgeon be able to survive? ---- Please give me feedback, so I can improve my story as it continues. If you have questions, anything related to the setting of this story. Please ask me, this way I can develop my story as well.

The Mischievous Maiden & The Sleeping Prince

A runaway maiden finds herself entangled in a tale of horror when she saves the Bride of a prince from a Haunted Castle. --- WARNING: HEAVY SUPERNATURAL ELEMENTS, GORE, DISTURBING THEMES, SLOW-BURN ROMANCE, RICH-IN-STORY NOVEL! I hope you like this story. If you wish, please support this tale by voting, rating, and commenting. Your feedback on typos or bad grammar is welcomed and appreciated.

An Ordinary Complex

_ _ _ _ MXFXF relationship. Please read the note. Please add it to the collection then and support me. All feedback will be appreciated Perhaps everyone was right, but Lisa Grace was cursed. How else would you explain what happened to her life and her dream of living an Ordinary Life? ——— ‘This will not work out, so we should break up now. It’s not you, it’s me! I recently found my soul mate and want to be with them.” Lisa was not shocked when her boyfriend told her this. She did not even have enough energy to be angry or demand answers. Perhaps she would have said something if this was the first time this happened. However, after being broken up for the 24th time, Lisa had no hope of ever having a meaningful relationship again. After all, Lisa was an ordinary girl with an extraordinary rumor - if you dated her, you would find your soul mate. So, when a stranger approached Lisa with red eyes, a charming smile, and a beautiful face, she expected it to be a quick relationship for her. But little did she know she was stepping into a world she could never escape. Would the flash of gold she saved become her salvation? Or would that beautiful temptation make her forget her world? …… “All I ever wanted was an ordinary life with someone who cared! It would have made my mother’s neglect and my father’s absence much easier for me to bear!” Lisa wanted this in her life—to be ordinary and never worry about her place in the world. However, just because ‘SHE’ wanted to be left alone did not mean that the ‘World’ would let her be alone. She had made these two fall for her, and now she would be stuck with a vampire’s obsession and a werewolf’s possessiveness. ______ This story will have a straight pairing as well as Yuri and will have abo themes as well as fantasy themes. Female Alphas are Futas. If it's not your cup of tea, leave before you enter. MXFXF relationship, age gap, and unbalanced relationships. Please read the note, add it to the collection, and support me. All feedback will be appreciated. Leave a lot of feedback for me.

Renascimento como um Tigre: A Irmã é a Imperatriz Renascida!

Após transmigrar, Jiang Che descobriu que havia se tornado um pequeno Tigre do Nordeste em um zoológico, junto com um irmão e uma irmã. Jiang Che descobriu que podia ouvir os pensamentos internos de seu irmão e irmã. Seu irmão é na verdade a reencarnação de um Antigo Monarca Demônio e a irmã mais nova é a reencarnação de uma futura Imperatriz humana. Felizmente, Jiang Che ativou o sistema de feedback de vínculo, onde a força daqueles vinculados a ele o fortalece dez vezes em retorno.

All The Female Disciples Want To Kill Me

Su Bei sat on No-Sword Peak, contentedly watching his female disciple scurry about. That would have completed his first task for his System Quest assigned by "The Highest Ten Thousand Fold Feedback for Discipleship" system! Xia Ruoching looked at Su Bei with a serious face, “Master, this is the spiritual fruit I got from the Sect Leader. He said it'd be helpful for your injuries!” Su Bei gazed at the half-black, half-red fruit in front of him and fell into deep thought. “Are you sure this is what the fruit looks like?” "......" “This is the real deal, Master! That half is definitely not poisoned! Eating this spiritual fruit would be such a wonderful experience, ah!” "?" “......” Years later. Su Bei, while leading one of his many disciples back to Sword Sect, suddenly sneezed and muttered, “That's strange. Why do I keep feeling like a bunch of people are cursing me?” The eldest disciple looked at the new junior sisters with a stunned expression, “What? You want to kill Master too?” ...... The book is also known as "I Have the Highest Ten Thousand Fold Feedback System for Discipleship." "I Am a Transmigrator, Not the Su Bei You Know!” “I Really Didn't Steal The Disciples' Talents, Okay!” “Assassinations from the Reincarnated Disciples!” “Assassinating Master”

Wiedergeburt als Tiger: Schwester ist die wiedergeborene Kaiserin!

Nach seiner Transmigration entdeckte Jiang Che, dass er zu einem kleinen Nordosttiger in einem Zoo geworden war, zusammen mit einem Bruder und einer Schwester. Jiang Che entdeckte, dass er die inneren Gedanken seines Bruders und seiner Schwester hören konnte. Sein Bruder ist eigentlich die Reinkarnation eines Uralten Dämonen-Monarchs und die jüngere Schwester ist die Reinkarnation einer zukünftigen menschlichen Kaiserin. Glücklicherweise aktivierte Jiang Che das Bindungs-Feedback-System, bei dem die Stärke derjenigen, die an ihn gebunden sind, ihn im Gegenzug zehnfach stärkt.

Hundredfold Feedback System: The Emperor and his invincible wifes!

[No Virgin+Villain protagonist+Strong Wife+Emperor+Low-Key] Standing on top of the Palace of Heaven overlooking all living beings his hand behind his back with severals powerful empress next to him Jin Yi said softly: "Low-key is prosperity this is my Dao!" (The image does not belong to me and if there is a problem I will not hesitate to remove it.)

My Yandere Girlfriend Followed Me in Another World

Cleo died in a tragic accident while saving his girlfriend however his heroic acts is in vain since his girlfriend still died after. [You died due to heart attack] [The Gods took pity on your soul and decided to reincarnate you in a new world] * (No NTR and Cheating. A lot of bitch slapping by the mc and fmc once they got stronger) Chapters 31 and above will contain 1000+ words instead of the usual 500+ words. This is my first Novel so bear with my grammatical error and lack of experience. Feedback negative or positive are welcome as it helps me improve in the future. If you decided to give this Novel a chance. Thank you!

Lycan's Sin

A powerful tale of love and vengeance. When the person who you have sworn to kill turns out to be your lover. It's hard to forgive when wounds run so deep. You can't help when love runs Its course after years of hate. Will they give in to their desires or be the enemies the fate had made them be. I need feedback guys good or bad. You can bash me on my grammar and spelling mistakes so I may fix it Love and hugs Author

Ghost Rider in Twilight/TVD/TO

Shiva was a 28-years old ordinary man who died in a car crash and was reborn with the power of Ghost Rider in the Twilight and TVD (The Vampire Diaries) world. . . . Arthur's Note: My grammar may not be the best, but I'm working on improving it. I don't own any of the characters, only my original character (OC). I would appreciate feedback and support if you enjoy the story. I will be updating it three to four days a week.

Saranghae My Superstar

Hana Subekti, seorang mahasiswi Indonesia yang mendapat beasiswa untuk kuliah di Korea selatan. K-Art University menjadi kampus tempat ia menimba ilmu. Namun, suatu hal terjadi dan membuatnya harus menjadi seorang karyawan magang sebagai asissten penanggung jawab artis di sebuah agensi. Hal ini membuatnya harus berhubungan dengan seorang aktor sekaligus penyanyi yang sangat terkenal di Korea, Kang Junhyuk. Artis asuhan agensi tempat Hana bekerja yang ternyata punya sifat jelek di balik gemerlapnya panggung hiburan yang membesarkan namanya. Kang Junhyuk membenci Hana dari awal mereka bertemu. Bagaimana Hana dan hatinya ketika di benci oleh orang yang juga ia kagumi saat berada di televisi? Mampukah Hana menjungkir balikkan dunia Junhyuk? ikutin terus yuk.... Please tinggalkan komen dan review kalian setelah baca yaa... karena feedback dari kalian sangat berarti... Mari nge-halu bersama fufufu

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New Life as a Futanari Tentacle Girl

This will be the first time writing something. I'm going to take all genres I like and try force them together. The MC gets reincarnated into a world of swords and magic. Start of the novel will be character and setting introduction, and later MC will travel around. R18 chapters will naturally come later... nevermind, the whole story is R18. First few chapters are just her building her 'character'. [R18 Tags] Harem | NSFW | Domination | Threesome | Foursome | Tentacle | Futa on Female | Female on Futa | Futanari | Incest | Anal | Sex | Choking | Humiliation | Lolicon Dis*cord https://disc*rd.gg/QPK42eMnUw replace the * with a o I am open to feedback and hope you enjoy.

Luck Stat Broken: Rise of the Khan

Arc One Complete. Rewrote the first 35 Chaptes fully, June 15, 2026. Appreciate any and all feedback. *** Everyone else with 1 Luck. Will Wick woke up with 30 Luck and an error message where his ceiling should be. That was the least strange part of his morning. The voice in his head—ancient, unimpressed, and absolutely certain Will is doing everything wrong—belongs to history's greatest conqueror. Genghis Khan has reviewed Will's memories, assessed his life choices, and has opinions. Loud ones. The main one being: the trillion-dollar corporation that harvested humanity's souls to power their own empire needs to be dismantled. Sector by sector. Server by server. Until the cage they built around this world belongs to someone else. Khan has done this before. Last time it was the Eurasian steppe. The principle, he insists, is exactly the same. Will already lost his family to the cold, corporate math of the old world. Now he's stranded 100,000 years in the future, on an Earth that healed itself while humanity was gone, facing billionaires who bought their way to power before the System even dropped. Genghis thinks this is fine. Genghis has a plan. Will is pretty sure the plan involves conquering everything. He's not wrong. [Progression Fantasy | LitRPG | Slow Burn Conquest | Historical Ghost Companion | Broken Luck Build] One Chapter a day, making extensive edits to early chapters based on feedback. 100+ chapter backlog. Please leave your thoughts on the story good or bad!

Blood Lust: The Midnight Resort

Hiraya has always known that she had special skills that were quite strange. Imagine her surprise then when an infamous aristocrat chooses her from the many talents of the Midnight Resort’s Mediterranean Branch to be exclusively his due to these mysterious capabilities. Marion is not the typical multi-billionaire businessman. His family history is of regal stature and has a long history of power and prestige. However, he also holds a dark secret that needs a unique and special woman to solve. And he is intent on making her his by buying her from the Resort. Neither one of them wanted to fall in love. Yet they did… And that’s when they realize this might be the death of them. +++ Like it ? Add to library！Also, you can give feedback,stones or stars. :)