What the hell ? I got reincarnated in another world. [Choose class] [Monster Or Human Class ?] Monster Class. [Mind Flare] Yeah i choose Mind Flare. I shall Hypnotize my MILF step-mother with huge butt and her three daughters for my use. wtf!!?? Ogre girls with sexy bodies and huge breasts, i won't miss that one. "get naked and bend down, girl." "yes, master." Wait ? this beast girl have 6 breasts and everyone hates it bro why ? this is heaven. Those who come in my way will kill themselves as they look in my eyes and all the females who deny me shall receive my holy seed even without their consent. [Grammar Until Chapter 115 is not that good... but it's worth the read. After that it's all good.] [Cover isn't mine, contact me to take it down.] [Note: EVERY CHARACTER IN THIS NOVEL IS ABOVE 18+ AND THEY ARE LEGALLY ADULTS ACCORDINGLY TO THE WORLD'S RULES THAT THIS STORY IS BASED ON.] [Discord: https://discord.gg/wEMdgmkt9Q]
The Writing is sometimes clunky but the gramar is exelent and within 5 stars. Updates are rather stable every 1-2 days. The story development seems sometimes forced but is not bad. The MC is a combination of brooding dark and every one for himself and then still some good within. This could make for an interesting complicated character, but in this case it didn't work for me. It might be because the MC is so over the top of edgelord that it just doesn't work for me when he hates others for helping him without expecting benefits and refuses to even give a simple thank you while helping others for no benefits. The World would be prety interesting without the fate system. If one of the core concepts of your system is manipulation of probability you should get probability at least remotely right. In this story, if the probability of an event, the MC wants to hapen, is beyond 50% it hapens. If it is less it might hapen. (Like the same event has 16 times in a row an outcome with a 75% probability(and I probably did not count all of them)).