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The pacing of the story is quite good. The paths of each charaters diverge then intersect directly in a singular flow/path. However, there are times where this aforementioned path is too direct which takes out the excitement on the plot. For example, FC wants to do this, and thus that very same scenario indeed happens on the next scene. The lack of unconventional obstacles that the FC had to improvise through denies us of the chance to see how she reacts at extra factors that she had not considered beforehand. Having said that, a direct plot line is still an effective approach to build up tension quickly and progress the story smoothly.

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So far its another lovely IET novel, the character development is there and there is defiantly good world background. The MC takes a slow path to through direct cultivation (ex. going from golden core to next stage) but his strength improves continuously.

No trash dialogue and direct to the important point. Yi Yun was also smart character ****** his own path of martial art. I rather compare YiYun by Yoko (Jin Yong character) Yi Yun improve and breakthrough is so efficient make the story feel solid

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