Nathan, a sixteen year old boy known for his hot temper, is forced to leave his friends and relocate to the countryside with his family after his father loses his job. In the new environment, Nathan finds solace in a nearby forest. One day while he was walking around the forest, he encounters a mysterious woman with blue hair and red eyes. Before he could react, the woman transforms into a beam of light and causes Nathan to undergo a transformation. At the same time, a huge energy blast occured and it could be seen by everyone on earth. The blast caused earth to undergo a drastic change and people with abilities called gifted appeared. When he wakes up sixteen years later, he discovers he has become a vampire with elemental powers due to the mysterious woman he saw inside the forest. He also found out that she was inside him and she also had a mission of her own, but he still remained sixteen years old due to her freezing the time around him. In return for the power she gave him, he was given a dire task to become the king of the vampires. Determined to find his family, Nathan embarks on a thrilling journey, using his newfound abilities and the system given to him by the mysterious woman to navigate a world filled with danger and mystery. Join Nathan as he rises to the top and uncovers the secrets that lie ahead while also searching for his family. ******************************************** Note: This is my first novel, so I will improve the more I write. Please support me with power stones, golden tickets, gifts and comments. It'll motivate me alot. Thank you. Join the discord please: https://discord.com/invite/8JcgTgrcV7 Please check out my other novels: Reincarnated With A Revenge System The Extra Seeks Chaos
I gave this novel: Writing Quality 4/5 ~ in comparison to other originals, decent English Stability of Updates 3/5 (unsure how stable the updates are, opted for the middle) Story Development 3/5 ~ I feel I was VERY generous with this score Character Design 2/5 ~ I feel I was quite generous with this score given lack of just about everything regarding characters and their interactions World Background ~ Less generous than with Char. Design with this score as there has been a tiny bit of W.Background, but not memorable This novel is all about mindless, senseless slaughter and... that's about it thus far. No time is spent on character growth. MC is an otaku! When otaku angry, otaku SMASH! Otaku want points! Otaku no forgive! Otaku no mercy! You follow orders and trash my restaurant with mortal weapons? You mortal? Otaku no care! Otaku angry, otaku SMASH! huehuehue xd This is what it feels like to read this novel. The MC gets an invincibility barrier that lasts for 500 hits at chapter 1 and uses it to do stupid **** as if he has never played a game in his life. The system gives him a bunch of op usable items that he uses to completely ignore cultivation levels and otaku angry, otaku SMASH! The MC is an otaku that apparently has no qualms about, quite literally, mindless slaughter and torture. Subjectively speaking I do not like these kinds MC's as they make the novel completely pointless to read. There is no personality to them, no hint of intelligence. The word 'overwhelm' means 'kill everything that offends you' here, regardless of how small the offense seems to be. I do not understand where this is supposed to go as no purpose has been given whatsoever. Just otaku angry, otaku smash. We're done-zo with the fun-zo, otaku angry, otaku smash. You're probably annoyed with reading this already, huh? But you know what? Otaku angry, otaku smash. Objectively speaking, my scoring has been objective as I've not taken into account anything I've said in my rant about this novel. There is no info truly given about the mc - what kind of a person he was before rebirth and how he's changing afterwards. His savage personality is sometimes explained as being influence by the system and sometimes the author just says "...because he's an otaku..." or "...as an otaku...". The allied side characters(females ofc) are completely irrelevant to everything regarding the MC other than being potential **** mates due the nature of the system/MC pairing, nothing can come out of those characters. I honestly that remember if the world itself was every mentioned in the novel - don't even know where the MC is but that might be my fault for not remembering(that's how memorable the setting is with the info we're given). The novel seems to want to thread the path between 'Leveling up and becoming undefeatable' and 'Ultimate scheming system' but it just... otaku angry, otaku smash y'know?