unwanted immortal adventurer
Jasmine is the first daughter of the great Alpha Bale. Because of her status as a bastard child, she lives a life maltreated scrubbing floors and attending to the needs of her father, step mother, step siblings and the entire pack. But her life makes a drastic turn when she is switched in place for her father’s legitimate daughter to be married off to the Handsome and Cold hearted Alpha Xaden. Xaden is determined to punish Jasmine for the sins of her father who had massacred his entire family, even though she is nothing like her father. Hate slowly turns to desire, fierce passion and finally love. But what happens when Xaden discovers that Jasmine, was planted as a spy to bring his downfall and was not in fact the original princess he was promised to? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Let this be a lesson to everyone. Royal or not, Alpha or Omega," He declares. "You will steer clear of what is mine. In my own territory. In my pack." With that, he tosses the bloodied arm aside and takes Jasmine away from their shocked gaze.
Positive: nice story, good writing. It doesn't seem like is your first novel 👍 Negative: it's a friking mashup between adventure/ immortal/ japanese fiction. I mean, adventurer style of lvl up with a system, in a immortal world, with skills from japanese fiction! Wdf... If that setting of immortal world was absent, it would be a great +. Is pretty confusing, you know. I'm not a native english speaker , so excuse my poor grammar. Keep up the good work.