silver bullets
College graduate, Su Ming, accidentally became a temporary worker at the Super Zoo and gained the ability“Friend of Animals,” allowing him to communicate with animals, and even control them!
Di i say “silver balls”? Silver balls is big Silver balls are shiny Silver balls is hard ———————————— Diffinitely silver balls arent too big
So... It's hard to talk about characters when there are only two chapters, but they seem at least good. The flow of the story is really well done. The mood is delivered. The only problem I have is no background. I don't know where it all is happening. There are also some grammar issues. You repeat some words too close to each other. For example 'bullets, 'bullets, and more 'bullets. It's too many bullets too close to each other. Overall, it's looking very promising. Keep up the good work.
I read Cradle of Love but the way the story continues here is maaadddd. Good job author. this book got me hooked and high on the alexander and lia love story and revenge. bullets bullets
She needs a silver needle? Oh I have one but it’s not silver Nicccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccce novel :)
I arrived at the fruit part and when it started to distribute, like 10 cent bullets ... I arrived at the fruit part and when it started to distribute, like 10 cent bullets ... I arrived at the fruit part and when it started to distribute, like 10 cent bullets ... I arrived at the fruit part and when it started to distribute, like 10 cent bullets ...