penggunaan koma sebelum dan

CEO Cantik dan Ahli Super

Dia adalah keturunan yang disisihkan oleh keluarga berkuasa, dan dia berharap untuk kembali ke kehidupan yang damai di kota, tetapi tak terduga, masalah muncul kembali!

A thought of storm · Urban

Supreme Dan Refiner of Realms

Dahil sa kanyang natatanging tadhana, madaming nakasalamuha si Jeter Lee na mga Diyosa at ng Demoness kung saan ay natanggap ang kanilang walang kapantay na pamana, mga divine pulse, ultimate martial arts, at transendent alchemy techniques, na nagbigay sa kanya ng magandang paglalakbay sa mundo ng cultivation. Ito ay kuwento ng paglalakbay ng isang natatanging alchemist tungo sa rurok ng pag gawa ng mga mahimalang mga pills o dan.

Misty_Ellaine · Fantasy

Kemampuan Pemahaman: Menciptakan dan mengajarkan Dao di berbagai dunia

Lin Yuan, membawa "Pintu ke Dunia Tak Terhitung," bertransmigrasi ke Alam Semesta Besar Lautan Bintang. Di sini, yang terkuat bisa menghancurkan sistem bintang dengan jentikan jari, dan melintasi jutaan tahun cahaya dalam sekejap. Sebagai penghuni dasar, Lin Yuan hanya bisa mengandalkan "Pintu ke Dunia Tak Terhitung" dan bakat bawaannya, "Pemahaman Melawan-Surga," untuk menjelajahi dunia tak berhingga, diam-diam menjadi semakin kuat. 【Pemahaman Melawan-Mu memungkinkan kamu untuk membudidayakan Kitab Transformasi Otot-Tendon, memahami 'Teknik Ilahi Memperkuat Darah Transformasi Otot-Tendon'】【Pemahamanmu adalah Melawan-Surga, ketika memperluas pemahamanmu ke Petir di Telapak Tangan, menghasilkan penguasaan 'Teknik Pembukaan Penciptaan Petir'】【Pemahamanmu adalah Melawan-Surga, saat mengamati kelahiran dan kematian dunia, mengarah ke wawasan 'Dunia dalam Genggaman'】【Pemahamanmu adalah Melawan-Surga,, melalui mempelajari seni inkarnasi eksternal, menghasilkan 'Teknik Hebat Transformasi Diri'】 ...... Dalam perjalanannya yang tak pernah usai, Lin Yuan terus menjadi semakin kuat, hingga... ia tak terkalahkan di semua dunia.

It's not Sunday · Eastern

Keindahan dan Binatang-Binatang

``` Setelah menemukan dirinya di dunia manusia binatang, seorang macan tutul menyelamatkannya dan kemudian menculiknya. Bai Qingqing mengalami keruntuhan mental yang cukup parah karena jantan-jantan di dunia ini seindah dan setampan merak yang sedang memamerkan bulunya. Di lain sisi, betina-betina sangatlah jelek, namun tetap sangat dikasihi oleh jantan-jantan. Sebagai seorang siswi SMA yang cantik, entah bagaimana dia menjadi kecantikan yang paling mempesona di dunia ini. Yang paling buruk, dunia ini adalah masyarakat matriarkal. Dia tidak ingin memiliki tiga atau empat suami yang menunggunya! Kehidupannya menjadi tentang menggoda macan tutul, menggelitik harimau, merayu ular berbisa, dan menangkap elang. Bai Qingqing dengan harem penuhnya, terlalu sedih untuk menangis. Dia benar-benar tidak menginginkan semua ini. "Hei, hei, Saudara Macan, Saudara Harimau, Saudara Ular, Saudara Elang, kalian sedang apa? Jangan dekat-dekat!" Ada empat pria utama: Macan tutul yang muda dan kuat, ular yang emo dan pendiam, harimau yang kuat, dan elang yang dingin dan penyendiri. ```

Dreams of White Tresses · Fantasy

Alam Mitos dan Legenda

Jin, seorang gamer hardcore yang masih tinggal dengan ibunya di usia 24 tahun. Dia tidak pernah bisa mempertahankan pekerjaan tetap sejak lulus, pacarnya sejak SMA memutuskannya demi sahabatnya dan dia terus-menerus dihajar oleh sekelompok anggota geng lokal. Ayahnya meninggalkan dia dan ibunya ketika menjadi kaya dari lotere dan mendapatkan keluarga baru, bebas dari hutang dan beban seperti yang dikatakannya. Ibunya bekerja di 3 tempat untuk menjaga agar semuanya tidak berantakan, kecuali dirinya sendiri yang perlahan-lahan melemah. Suatu hari dalam perjalanannya pulang dengan VRMMORPG imersi penuh pertama dan terbaru yang disebut Alam Mitos dan Legenda atau RML singkatnya, dia meninggal akibat kecelakaan tabrak lari. RML diiklankan sebagai VRMMORPG imersi penuh pertama di dunia, memungkinkan pemain dengan keterampilan di dunia nyata, seperti pelatihan pedang, seni bela diri, memanah atau waktu reaksi, untuk mendapatkan keuntungan dalam permainan itu sendiri! Meskipun Jin meninggal dan pada saat itu jiwa dari dunia lain menyeberang ke dalam tubuhnya dan mewarisi ingatannya. Pria yang dikenal sebagai Izroth yang pernah dijuluki sebagai kultivator terhebat di tujuh alam, jiwanya bereinkarnasi ke dunia modern tahun 20xx dalam tubuh Jin. "Apa semua kenangan aneh ini yang mengalir ke dalam pikiranku..? Aku telah ke semua tujuh alam dan belum pernah melihat yang seperti ini. Bumi kah namanya?" "K-Kultivasiku..! Kembali ke nol! Tubuh ini begitu lemah dan esensi spiritual di sini sangat langka. Tapi kekuatan jiwaku tidak ternoda." "Aku akan memperbaiki semua kesalahan yang telah dilakukan padamu, dendammu akan terbalaskan." "Ini disebut video game? Aku akan memainkannya! Karena kau telah memberikan tubuh ini padaku meskipun itu tidak direncanakan, aku akan mencapai tujuanmu menjadi #1." "Jadi sekte di sini disebut guild... Aku akan membuat yang terkuat!" "Ha? Gamer terhebat dunia? Jangan pikir kau bisa membullyku dan tidak membayar harganya!" Aksi, Petualangan, Pengkhianatan, Romansa, Balas dendam. Bergabunglah dengan Izroth dalam perjalanannya untuk menjadi pemain #1 dan menciptakan guild #1 di RML!

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